Drabble; Green.

Jun 16, 2008 23:51

Title Green
Rating PG
Author magdalan
Summary Die's shirt is green and Kaoru realizes he likes life - just the way it is.

Their knees knocked. )

diexkaoru, author: magdalan, type: fanfiction, kaoruxdie, format: one-shot, genre: bandfic, rating: pg-13, status: finished

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Comments 19

wilwa June 20 2008, 17:37:10 UTC
I LOVED this. It's so greeaaat to find someone that likes everyday, domestic life of theirs. That is my favourite genre, or how to say. More, please! :D

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fonulyn June 23 2008, 14:22:03 UTC
If I was more awake I would request like a hundred drabbles like this, but my brains aren't really co-operating with me. I love the fact that they just ARE. They're together, living just like any couple, know each other through and through and are happy that way. I love it. And I love the thought of Die using Kaoru's clothes XD

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cami_sama August 27 2008, 18:55:55 UTC
Lovely. Simply, Lovely.
I love the way they have this simple normal life, because of course they do.
So sweet <33 it warmed my heart

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mo_chan_tf September 27 2008, 00:17:14 UTC
that was -wonderful-. o_o I love stories that deal with everyday life, but it's difficult to find one that deals with this in a real way that is not boring but doesn't seem unreal. yours is interesting, it really feels like it could be true, aaaand everything important was there, explicitly or not. I really liked Kaoru just looking at Die and thinking about the simple yet meaningful things. x3

"Yeah. I know we make our living off of projecting this stupid image of unhappiness and despair and all that shit, but yeah, I'm happy."

LOVED that line. XDD <3

hope to see more good stuff from you! :3

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mo_chan_tf September 27 2008, 00:26:10 UTC
oh, oh, now I read your note *kicks herself for not reading it earlier*

can I really make a request? *-*~

I'd like to see Kaoru and Die getting rid of old stuff bvecause they need more space in their apartment or because Kaoru was going to throw something out (a pair of unused shoes? a stained, ripped old shirt? his gundam parafernalia which I'm sure he has somewhere and that probably take a lot of space?) but decided to turn it into something huger. 8D and talking nonsense or about particular moments and such. you don't really have to follow this, I just... want something. haha. *loser* |D

and thaaaaaaanks in advance! X3

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cateris April 1 2009, 18:15:47 UTC
Why did you stopped writing? Switched the fandom? Another good artist sold for k-pop fandom (although I kinda understand why ;))

Aaanyways. I really liked the atmosphere in this and I totally added it to memories after reading it. It's that "couples life" that makes it really charming. The fact that we get the hint that they're together for quite a while, not exactly blase, but developing in that sort of routine we all know about. I like your Die and way he's comforting Kaoru and all of his questions, and how in a way we sense a different kind of maturity from him.

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