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difusion

You finally did it

Mar 30, 2011 21:57

Title: You finally did it
Rating: PG 13
Pairing: Sergio Ramos / Fernando Torres, and others mentioned.
Words: 771
Summary: Push and try if you can.
Disclaimer: We'll never know.
A/N: it isn't his Birthday here anymore but since it still is for everyone else, I'm technically not late posting this.

( una oveja dudas )

sergio ramos, fanfiction, fernando torres

Comments 13

kissmecait17 March 31 2011, 03:34:26 UTC

Oh wow. I really love this. I love that Sergio knows what Fernando is up to and I love the description of Fernando as this nervous-talker. It's lovely.

I love these lines:
He keeps his eyes closed the entire time, because he knows Fernando has been wanting to do this for a long, long time.

His fingers are tangled in Sergio's hair and they're smiling into their kisses now.
(That is such a wonderful visual.)

sumrndmgrl March 31 2011, 04:12:29 UTC

Aw! Nervous Fernando and expecting Sergio :)

notoriousjk March 31 2011, 04:17:34 UTC

awwhhhhh this was sweet. Sergio knowing all these years that Fernando had been leading up to this for all this time.

<3

cricket213 March 31 2011, 06:45:35 UTC

This was so short and sweet! Loved it!

snuzzie March 31 2011, 07:31:47 UTC

AWWWWWWWWEFGDGFDGF ADORABLE!!! best birthday present IMO. :>