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Concrit
This entry is for constructive criticism of my portrayal of Gokudera Hayato.
As this is my first time playing him from canon, I would appreciate any comments on what I'm doing right/wrong as well as advice on how to make him better.
This entry will stay at the top of Gokudera's journal. Comments are screened. -
explosion 048
What the hell is up with this damn house now? I swear there are things coming out of the walls where it's dark and there are all sorts of weird monsters. I even tried a damn exorcism on the things, but I think it just made them angrier; something took a chunk out of my shoulder and it's not healing. At least it's stop bleeding for now ( Read more... ) -
explosion 047
The house clearly isn't happy fucking killing us off. It wants to destroy itself too. It's a fucking mess everywhere thanks to the hail and the fucking fireballs yesterday. There's a huge fucking hole in wall and I'm sure I can see through the top of the house too. I nearly lost my damn arm to one of them... ugh ( Read more... ) -
explosion 046 [voice]
[Gokudera barely manages to lift his wrist to switch the device there on, but when he does there's a low groan and laboured breathing. When he speaks, his voice is weak and shaky.This biblical plague shit has gone too far. Hasn't the fucking house already proven it can play God? If it keeps going we still have boils, hail and fire, locusts, ( Read more... ) -
explosion 045
The first person who wishes me happy birthday will get a stick of dynamite stuck in a very uncomfortable place.
Has anyone seen Juudaime around? I haven't seen him in some time now...
Just like everyone else I don't like the House's silence... probably means it's going to drop something serious on us. Ugh, fucking wonderful. -
explosion 044 [voice]
[After discovering that the two times he's exploded that morning were linked to his anger, he decides to instead make a calm voice entry. It's clear that he's trying to stay calm by the shaking of his voice and how he keeps stopping to take a breath.]
This is pathetic.
Takeshi... Tonks... I need to talk to the two of you... -
explosion 043 [accidental voice/action to roomates]
[Gokudera wakes up, sits up, glances around the room and then proceeds to panic before clambering back under the sheets, knocking his wrist against the headboard and receiving a small shock as the device switches on.]
I th-think I'm just going to stay here today...
{ooc-this week Dera's going to be timid and panicky with random outbursts of happy ( Read more... ) -
explosion 042 [voice/action]
[Gokudera doesn't remember this place when he wakes up in the huge four poster bed. In fact, the only thing he can think is that this is another of Byakuran's tricks. This couldn't be the damn battleground for 'Choice', could it ( Read more... ) -
explosion 041 [action]
[Waking up on the grass to bright sun was not Gokudera's idea of a good time. So as soon as he'd realised the house had gone - with a little help from the announcement - he heads into the woods at the rear of the grounds for some shade. He doesn't go far in, but he finds himself a small clearing and plops down at the bottom of a tree, lighting a ( Read more... ) -
explosion 040
I suppose this isn't half as bad as what we've had to put up with lately, and if it was, there's an excess of alcohol to make it better. Then again, after my display last time the house had one of these parties and I had a lot to drink... Not like I actually have to go down to the party anyway, I could just stay in the house all week... Though now ( Read more... )