fic: Waking

[dior_anghel]

A very short fic, mind you. Just a few hundred words. I'm not happy with this one at all. But I haven't written Irvine/Squall in ages. I missed these two.

Constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. I'd like to make this into something I can be at least a little proud of.

That said, I hope you enjoy it anyway.

For as long as he could remember

Comments

[scribblemoose]

I don't know why you don't like this! I think it's lovely. :)

[dior_anghel]

Thank you! Then I am much more pleased with it. Every time I get a review from you I'm in fangirl heaven, here, since you're the one who got me started on this whole pairing (and since I've reread Blood and Sand exactly four times, not to mention made a hard copy of it.)

Thanks again! =)

[ginnyvos]

Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeee XD

[thewaywardrose]

There is nothing to critique. This little bon-bon wonderful.

[thewaywardrose]

Uh... This little bon-bon is wonderful.

Yeah, that makes waaay more sense.

[moonriddler_mim]

scribbles sent me. your work here is done, am puddle of goo. so sweet! ^_^

Last night came rushing back to him - hands tangled in hair, pulling each other closer, lips on lips and tongue and teeth, someone else's mouth finding places on his body he'd never even been aware of, and the dizzying sense of finally, at long fucking last, after so so long...

and this is yet another bit of proof that you don't need actual smex to make a fic hot! or a hot fic, depending on how you see it. ^_~

good work!

[dior_anghel]

*is still reeling at having been recced by scribbles*

Thank you! =) I liked that paragraph, too. I'm glad you enjoyed!

[reaperrain]

Yaaaaaaay, the community lives again! *throws confetti* Very short and sweet, I liked it a lot; especially the last line and the timid little 'Are you gonna hit me?' So cute! ^-^

[dior_anghel]

=D Thank you.

*points to top of journal* Hey, I made the picture and got it working!

[reaperrain]

So you did, and it's a very nice picture too. Fitting, somehow ^-^ Did LJ Help/LJ For Dummies sort you out after all?

[dior_anghel]

Actually, I couldn't find that community. *shrugs* But I asked my dad, because he's a computer genius, and he knew what to do.