fic: Waking

[dior_anghel]

A very short fic, mind you. Just a few hundred words. I'm not happy with this one at all. But I haven't written Irvine/Squall in ages. I missed these two.

Constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. I'd like to make this into something I can be at least a little proud of.

That said, I hope you enjoy it anyway.

For as long as he could remember

Comments

[mangacat]

*waves* another Scribble rec. You did great! The writing is awesome, and you conveyed everything perfectly in the short length of the fic. I enjoy well-written snapshots like these. I like how Squall is all non-fluffy. It's nice to see... and Irvine is such a dork :P

I also second this

someone else's mouth finding places on his body he'd never even been aware of, and the dizzying sense of finally, at long fucking last, after so so long...

being hot... and I'm not even a IxS shipper...

[dior_anghel]

=) Thanks! If I can get a non-shipper to enjoy it, I am definitely pleased.

[valentines_av]

Was detoured here by Scribblemoose's journal ^_^

X3 *squee* Oh I love the ending, I can just see Irvine asking if he's gonna get hit XD

...I can't get that image of him grinning out of my head... do you mind if I sketch it?

[dior_anghel]

Thank you!

Of course I don't mind! =D No one's ever sketched one of my fics (that I know of) before.

[dior_anghel]

Oh, but you have to let me know when you have it posted! ^^

[valentines_av]

Thanks muchly!

^_^ I'll send you the link when it's up!

[omega69]

..have goofy grin all over my face now *hides* xxx

[dior_anghel]

=) Thank you.

[wildejoy]

Thank you! =) ♥