Wow...very nice, hon. I am assuming that you wrote it. I hope things have been well with you. School has been great. I just got back from Thailand, which was incredible. Hopefully I will catch you soon!
You assume correctly darling, and thank you for the compliment. Things are as well as ever here in the good ole Hampton Roads area. I'm so glad that schools going well for you, and can't wait to hear more about your Thailand trip.
The structure of it is good, and provides an interesting form for the piece. I'd try to replace the words "forever" and "love" and such, but that's me. They are overused in poetry and I'm just a little tired of seeing them, is all. If you want genuine concrit, I can try, or you could ask Jeff. He's better at it than I am.
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Hoping to catch you too...
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The structure of it is good, and provides an interesting form for the piece. I'd try to replace the words "forever" and "love" and such, but that's me. They are overused in poetry and I'm just a little tired of seeing them, is all. If you want genuine concrit, I can try, or you could ask Jeff. He's better at it than I am.
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