Oh my GOD I want to build you everlasting monuments.
There so many beauiful moments in this whole thing but I think what I'm most stuck on are the little ways they go about admitting how they feel and saying what they want without being explicit about it, especialy in Louis, especially with their whole zap thing. I was just having this conversation with someone else, actually, but basically my favorite dynamics are always the ones where characters find ways to say what they mean without ever saying it, if that makes sense--I'm a little alergic to sentimentality sometimes, I think, aha--and you've got it down so perfectly with Louis here that I sort of feel like I never want to read anything else ever again? Unless you're the one writing it??
So basically: more, please. Whatever you want to write. A detailed guide to beekeeping, whatever, I don't even care.
That is so so awesome to hear! I actually really don't like having characters talk about their feelings -- reading it or DEFINITELY not writing it, but I've been consciously trying to put a bit more of that in my stories. It's great to hear that you didn't think it was overdone! That is a relief!
This is the super sweetest comment, thank you so much for reading and for saying such lovely things!!! ♥
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Brilliant, as always. <3
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There so many beauiful moments in this whole thing but I think what I'm most stuck on are the little ways they go about admitting how they feel and saying what they want without being explicit about it, especialy in Louis, especially with their whole zap thing. I was just having this conversation with someone else, actually, but basically my favorite dynamics are always the ones where characters find ways to say what they mean without ever saying it, if that makes sense--I'm a little alergic to sentimentality sometimes, I think, aha--and you've got it down so perfectly with Louis here that I sort of feel like I never want to read anything else ever again? Unless you're the one writing it??
So basically: more, please. Whatever you want to write. A detailed guide to beekeeping, whatever, I don't even care.
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That is so so awesome to hear! I actually really don't like having characters talk about their feelings -- reading it or DEFINITELY not writing it, but I've been consciously trying to put a bit more of that in my stories. It's great to hear that you didn't think it was overdone! That is a relief!
This is the super sweetest comment, thank you so much for reading and for saying such lovely things!!! ♥
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“So it’s Zayn’s fault,” Louis says. “You’re saying that it’s Zayn’s fault because of what his face looks like.”
it's totally zayn's fault!
thanks for writing this
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Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!
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ever.
the whole thing was fantastic, but damn girl. major kudos.
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Thanks a lot for commenting, ♥
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