One Direction fic | Method to the Madness | Louis/Zayn | NC-17 | ~12,000 words | Part 2/2

[disarm_d]

Comments

[arilyn9]

You're writing is beautifully intense. I enter it and I cannot leave before I've read it all. It carries a certain type of feeling, an atmosphere with it that is just breathtaking. Just, wonderfull. Thank you for writing and sharing ♥

[disarm_d]

Aww, gee! *grins* Thank you so much! That's really, really nice of you to say. Thank you very much for taking the time to comment, I super appreciate it! :D

[disarm_d]

Um, I've reread this comment 3 of 4 times, so we're even, :D Thank youuuuuuuuuuu. Seriously, that is all the most awesome, and I am grinning so hard right now. I know exactly what you're saying about finding Zayn sexy (beyond his own natural, hahah) by seeing him through Louis's eyes -- I've definitely experienced that reading other people's fic before, so it's super awesome if you felt that way through this! I basically just wrote this to try to get a handle on Louis's characterization and roll around in Zayn, so, you know, \o/ Thanks so much for commenting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have started another Louis/Zayn story already, so your wish is my command, :D

[threeturn]

Completely totally agreeing with everything aestivalblue just said so eloquently. This one just BLEW ME AWAY, like I feel all kinds of emotional about it and I'm not sure why? Maybe because of Louis just WANTING so intensely and deeply, like this is the most compelling description of obsessive crushing that I might ever have read. And the way he deals with it, so messy and confused and fighting the world and feeling everything. And the kissing the kissing the kissing and every description of Zayn, argh send helllllllp. Oh, and ZAP? Like, the contrast between the easy magic of ZAP and how hard figuring out what you want and getting it can actually be just breaks my heart. I mean, it's a happy ending! And you still broke my heart! How does that work?

[disarm_d]

Oh man, this comment made me beam at my computer screen, I can't even tell you! I'm really glad that Louis's crushing worked -- and the kissing, ahahaha. I was at my parent's house for the holidays and just decided to spend and entire evening writing kissing. No regrets! *g* I'm really glad you thought the ZAP stuff worked, and, yes, exactly! How hard it is to even figure out what you want in the first place, and then actually trying to get it, and, arg, I just want the partners in crime to be boyfriends forever, /o\

Thanks so much for leaving such a lovely comment, I've reread it a whole bunch of times and it makes me super happy, :DDDDDD

[lil_miss_coolio]

I don't usually read non-AU fics but everyone was reading this so I did too and it was really really good. I mean I totally totally adore this ship so it wasn't hard to like it even if it was non-AU. This was written really well :)

[disarm_d]

Thanks for giving this a try even though you don't read non-aus! :D I'm glad you liked it regardless.

[thilia]

I really enjoyed this. I especially liked how much you focused on descriptive details, especially during the sex scene (like with the foreskin or lack thereof, etc.). So... yes, I loved this! :)

[disarm_d]

Yay! I'm really glad you thought the descriptive details worked, that's awesome to hear. Thanks a lot!