Small Floating Things (Past Masuda/Yamashita)

Oct 21, 2011 04:23

Small Floating Things
Past Masuda/Yamashita.

Notes: This is entirely self-indulgence and not written for anyone else. I imagine there's going to many other fics with the same cliche, just with different pairings. Still posted this here, but I don't expect other people to like this at all. I don't dare try to sympathize with Yamapi now, and I can't ( Read more... )

p: masuda/yamashita, c: masuda takahisa, c: yamashita tomohisa, g: news

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vierran45 October 28 2011, 21:43:00 UTC
I enjoyed this.

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digitalized_ October 29 2011, 10:24:37 UTC
Thank you. ♥

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snow_meow October 29 2011, 08:52:16 UTC
It feels like a sad ending even with them saying their mutual goodbyes.

I feel like Pi was chasing a ghost throughout the fic.
I can understand why he chose to tell Koyama.

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digitalized_ October 29 2011, 10:53:02 UTC
Just a little sad, I hope? :)

Really glad you felt like you could understand Yamapi here. I put more thought into the actions than the reasons behind it, so it's nice knowing it still makes sense to people.

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erimeix November 10 2011, 21:50:58 UTC
oh it was so sad, Yamapi tried it until the end but... :(
It's the first fic I read about their withdrawing. Good job

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digitalized_ November 11 2011, 08:43:24 UTC
It's not meant to be too sad, just...a little. :P Thanks for reading ♥

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meissa November 11 2011, 17:16:51 UTC
Ahaha, I have mixed emotions. On the one hand "omg the writing is so pretty~!" On the other hand, I'm just kind of D:

I like that what happened between MassuPi is kind of the opposite of Yamapi leaving NEWS.

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digitalized_ November 12 2011, 09:49:29 UTC
I wrote this with conflicted feelings, so that might have come across? xD

Anyway AAAH I love your writing and coming from you this means a lot and I need to find a rooftop to yell out my feelings now MEEEEP. Thank you ♥♥

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sanjihan November 21 2011, 03:20:44 UTC
Interesting pacing. Sort of cold, detached, and laid-back. Totally worked for me.

It's a familiar image, his back amongst everything else.
This, though, was my favorite part.

Thanks for sharing.

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digitalized_ November 21 2011, 19:54:08 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting. That's one of my personal favorite lines, and I'm glad that it stood out for you. ♥ matches icon

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