HOW'S MY DRIVING?!

Any feedback on my characterization of Yazoo can go here. Don't hesitate to tell me- I really do want to hear it. All I ask is that you stay civil, and offer examples and/or solutions, rather then just voice the problem and do nothing to help.

I can't do anything about any problems if I don't know what's wrong first!

Anon is ( Read more... )

( What? The peons aren't trusted? )

[Yazoo's stumbled upon the ship's hospital area, black boots echoing on white tiles. This area seems completely free of the effects that altered the rest of the ship-- plush armchairs to one side, and tables topped with magazines. He isn't here for medical treatment.

It just makes for a nice change from the vampire that's been stalking him all ( Read more... )

Shame the rest didn't stay behind.

[He was only half speaking toward the sphere, though fully aware that it was on. The orange suit is discarded on the bed behind him, and Yazoo's already changed. It's a routine he's gotten a little too used to by now.]

Kadaj?

It's back. [The sphere is focused entirely on the black hole in the sky, and Yazoo's voice is coming from somewhere nearby.] This time it'll be the end.

[Although apparently, he doesn't mean for himself--] Ready to go yet?

[All that can be seen as the recording begins is a splash of silver. The view zooms out, revealing that it's just Yazoo, his back to the sphere. He's found an area that seems a bit worse for the wear-- a gaping hole where there might've been a rock or a bush, another big enough to have held a tree ( Read more... )

[There's a loud series of cracks, gunfire should anyone recognize the sound. As the sphere pans over the scene, you can see a few shrubs-- very clearly unoccupied-- and Yazoo, appearing far more alert than usual with a silver gun pointed at them. He actually looks like he's enjoying the sport.]

Got away? [But then a short pause-- no, nothing could ( Read more... )

Going with them?

( Filtered to Larxene )

[Here we have an area with a particularly dense frog population. Yazoo doesn't seem to care much for watching his step, thus anyone who knows him well enough may note that for once, he actually seems to be wearing an obvious expression: disgusted.

Why not? There are frog guts all over his boots. Not to mention what Larxene said.]And I heard you ( Read more... )