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OOC: comments and critique
If you have any problems with my portrayal of Haruka, please do speak up! It is my first serious attempt, after all~
Or if you just want to discuss something about my portrayal of her, or ask a question, or even want to tell me how much you like my Haruka, this is the place to do it! ♥
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[crucible_rpg] 011
[everybody residing in Kepler Cabins will see Haruka dressed... er, well, like a pink ninja. That would probably because she is, in fact, dressed like a pink ninja. That is... kind of irrelevent.]
So those funny looking things are actually other passengers?
Great, things just keep getting weirder and weirder-kamo.
Um. Like the Sphere. I don't ( Read more... ) -
[crucible_rpg] 010
Aww, and I was just about to take out a constellation!
That was kind of bright.
... The food was good, though-kamo.
What, numbers now? I don't think I get it-kamo. -
[crucible_rpg] 008
[Haruka's walking through the market place with a very serious expression on her face, eyes on the sky. She's ignoring the shouts of the sellers and casting glances left and right; this feels familiar, searching for something, maybe whatever she finds will be the key to finding out what's really going on ( Read more... ) -
[crucible_rpg] 007
... Um, guys?
[she grabs the Sphere and redirects it so that it's capturing the image of an illusionary bat flying and slamming into a wall, then flying and slamming, flying and slamming]
I'm sure it would have wore a hole in that wall if it wasn't just a hologram-kamo.
The Captain might need to reevaluate his crew. -
[crucible_rpg] 006
[the Sphere is on, though Haruka does not seem to notice or care, giving her back to the camera as she sits at... a creepy old pub?
She's eating bowls of something, though it's unclear what, but there's lots of slurping involved ( Read more... ) -
[crucible_rpg] 005
[Haruka's blinking sleepily at the Sphere and rubbing her eyes] Good morning...
[she looks down at herself and notices the fancy ballgown for the first time.]
Wait, what? Now I've got another outfit ( Read more... ) -
[crucible_rpg] 004
[the Sphere zooms in on a confused Haruka's face, before slowly zooming out to show her in a black outfit, more silly than elegant]
... Huh?
AHHHHHH, GET ME OUT OF THIS UGLY THING!
W-who changed my clothes again?! I can't take them OFF! [each word marked with an insistent tug on the offending clothes ( Read more... ) -
[crucible_rpg] 003
((Dang, missed the world ending. ^^;; Won't happen again, I hope!))
[have a very confused Haruka, sitting upright in her bed.]
... Was everything a dream-kamo?
But, the Sphere is here!
And, besides all that, how did I get on a ship?[she shifts, then cringes] Oww, what the... [she reaches under the covers and pulls out the same headless fish she ( Read more... ) -
[crucible_rpg] 002
[Haruka's face appears on the screen, looking troubled.]
... please, has anyone seen Eneko?
It looks like this-kamo.
[a small device is opened up in front of the Sphere to show the flickering image of a cheerful-looking pink feline with an unusually crescent-shaped cream mask and an even stranger tail, while an audio recording plays: Eneko - ( Read more... )