Comments | distantxmemoryx: I wrote this 5 years ago as a sophomore in H.S.

distantxmemoryx

I wrote this 5 years ago as a sophomore in H.S.

Apr 05, 2009 02:38

Genocide The noose still hangsWhere the lonely man criedHe strung it up thereAlong with his pride The pistol residesAlongside the bedWhere the beaten down boyLost his last thread The razor still hidesNext to the sinkWhere the scared little girlPressed down far too deep The bottle lay shatteredUpon the tableWhere the confused womanConfirmed her new ( Read more... )

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ena666 April 5 2009, 13:10:27 UTC

This is beautiful !
I love writing poems too
It gets all the anger and depression outside

distantxmemoryx April 5 2009, 13:19:29 UTC

thank you! i used to love writing back in high school but i feel like i dont have it in me anymore. i miss it so much. its good therapy.

shame... rsquinvegas April 6 2009, 10:15:23 UTC

Its a shame you don't feel like writing anymore. You have a very beautiful way of telling a story. Your poems seem to paint a picture in my mind that makes it resonate in my chest. Even if it is about something dark it helps to read someones writing when it is something your going through also. And for that I say thank you.

Re: shame... distantxmemoryx April 6 2009, 10:18:58 UTC

i love sharing something so personal to me and receiving positive feedback. And for that, I say thank you :)