I read this a while ago and never got a chance to comment, so I'll do it now.
This is, without a doubt, the most beautifully written story I've ever read. I've read it about 12 times now, and it gets better every time. It made me cry uncontrollably for about 15 minutes, too, which no other fan fic has ever made me do. Anyways, thank you for writing this. It's amazing.
P.S. pete says, "thank you." for a moment, william wonders if he is drunk but he doesn't have a drink, just a happy grin on his face and a letter clutched in his hand. "you've given us something," he smiles, his words whispered against william's ear as he stands on his toes, bill leaning down to wrap his arms around his friend's body. "we don't have much anymore but you two have given us a home, at the end of the world, no less. i thought it would be hard to find that, but it's been real easy." That right there was my favorite part. Completely gorgeous and tear-jerking. :)
This story is breath-takingly gorgeous, guh, I don't even think I can properly convey all of my love for this in words. (but I will certainly try
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i realized after the last comment of yours that i replied to, that i'll never be able to thank you enough for what you've said about these stories. sometimes i write things and i hope for people to notice them but no one does. it seems to me that you've picked out all of the things i love about this story and you love them too, which makes my heart soar like you wouldn't even believe
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Wow. Thank you for taking the time to reply back! Honestly, you didn't have to, and I absolutely love hearing writers talk about their own work.
It makes sense to me. :-) You have such a wonderful grasp on characterizations that I feel like anything you write will never be too overdone or maudlin. And, oh yes, Gabe and William do make this world a better place. As does your icon, which made me grin for a whole minute. I can't pick one is more adorable. Guh.
(btw, I'm relieved to know I haven't scared you off yet.)
i'm one of those crazy people who loves to comment back and i absolutely appreciate all of the feedback i receive and i am also one of those crazy people who can't ever be scared off!
i'm glad my nonsense makes sense to someone other than myself, sigh, and that you appreciate gabe and william as much as they deserve to be appreciated.
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This is, without a doubt, the most beautifully written story I've ever read. I've read it about 12 times now, and it gets better every time. It made me cry uncontrollably for about 15 minutes, too, which no other fan fic has ever made me do. Anyways, thank you for writing this. It's amazing.
P.S. pete says, "thank you." for a moment, william wonders if he is drunk but he doesn't have a drink, just a happy grin on his face and a letter clutched in his hand. "you've given us something," he smiles, his words whispered against william's ear as he stands on his toes, bill leaning down to wrap his arms around his friend's body. "we don't have much anymore but you two have given us a home, at the end of the world, no less. i thought it would be hard to find that, but it's been real easy."
That right there was my favorite part. Completely gorgeous and tear-jerking. :)
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It makes sense to me. :-) You have such a wonderful grasp on characterizations that I feel like anything you write will never be too overdone or maudlin. And, oh yes, Gabe and William do make this world a better place. As does your icon, which made me grin for a whole minute. I can't pick one is more adorable. Guh.
(btw, I'm relieved to know I haven't scared you off yet.)
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i'm glad my nonsense makes sense to someone other than myself, sigh, and that you appreciate gabe and william as much as they deserve to be appreciated.
the puppy. the puppy is cuter.
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I'm so glad that ourgossip_lips recommended this fic.
It's so great.
Where I live, it rains a lot, too.
So I can identify with downpour, although not necessarily with end of the world credentials :P
I loved this. It was beautiful. I don't know why, but when I read a fix without caps, it's automatically better for me.
This was great.
Mems, for suuuure. ♥
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