LJI 11 W0: Intro

[dizzydog]

It's time for homecoming, no more roaming, get back to the home we're always in within our skin. You enter the door, wanderin' your way across the floor, surrounded by this lore of yours you made in days before. Brush your fingers across the boxes that store the things you've done. Some for fun, some you must, but one by one you put them down to

Comments

[tigrkittn]

This needed to be a video 😉

[dizzydog]

Ppppppfffft, like THAT would ever happen. People might notice I'm three adorable otters in a raincoat pretending to be a human!

But also yes, I have a rhythm and way to pronounce some of the words in my head that I dunno if will be read the same way to other people. We'll see :D

[tigrkittn]

Also I think you meant stories, not stores.

[dizzydog]

I'm using stores as in "supplies", I almost did change it to stories but I already used stories in the previous paragraph.

[adoptedwriter]

[kittenboo]

I love the imagery here.

[dizzydog]

Thank you! This was a hard one to pull together, I've gotten rusty :D

[kdb22]

[static_abyss]

I absolutely LOVE this entire piece from beginning to end. The way you used rhyming words in between your paragraphs really gave the whole piece the vibe of a song or performance poetry. That was wonderful!

[dizzydog]

Thank you! :D About halfway thru in my head I realized I was reading it with a sort of beat poet rhythm and liked it so ran with it a little, trying to draw the rhymes out further thru it than I normally would.