LJI 11 W1: Resolution

[dizzydog]

Comments

[kdb22]

[bleodswean]

This is wonderful! So visual and your story moves along perfectly!

[dizzydog]

Thank you! With my fiction I tend to picture it in my head like I'm watching a movie, then describe what I'm seeing as it happens :D

[me_sonrei]

This is amazingly weird. You drew me in and kept my attention, and I didn't expect the rescue at the end. Well done!

[dizzydog]

"Amazingly weird" makes me very happy, I like finding that vibe in what I write! Thank you! :D

[m_malcontent]

Wanna GM a Shadowrun campaign? Excellent writing.

[dizzydog]

Thanks! Writing Shadowrun would be a lot of fun, GMing it would drive me nuts cause players know exactly how to derail everything :D

[orockthro]

I found this world very intriguing! :)

[dizzydog]

Thanks! I hope to get a chance to expand and revisit it in later topics! We'll see where the will of Gary takes us :D