Partners in Crime [PG-13] for Our Pinch Hitters

May 15, 2011 17:08

The original recipient of this gift is no longer participating, but the author has kindly offered to dedicate their story to everyone who has pinch hit for us this round as a special thank you for their efforts.

Title: Partners in Crime
Author: pips_n_chiaw
Rating: PG-13
Recipient: Our Pinch Hitters
Disclaimer: Harry Potter and all other characters, etc. are ( Read more... )

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shiv5468 May 15 2011, 23:03:26 UTC
Lol. A nice, sweet story, with a bit of banter, which I love.

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owlbait May 16 2011, 01:01:05 UTC
“You know, he was a twig short of a wand. Fell asleep while Merlin was handing out favors.”

cute :)

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rzzmg May 16 2011, 01:29:09 UTC
Cute, short ficlet! I loved their banter and their relationship v. work dynamics! The use of magic on YouTube - snarf! That was a great plot bunny!

Saw a few SPaG issues, but easily fixed.

Overall, a fluffy, angsty, fun piece! Thank you, mystery author, for sharing it!!!

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margaritaabate May 16 2011, 03:01:48 UTC
I really enjoyed the pacing of your fic. It was an action story and the pacing was fast, energetic, full of bursts of the unexpected and banter that volleyed back and forth enough to give your neck a crick! Really fun, funny and with just the right amount of edge! Faboo....

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strawberry_kait May 16 2011, 03:51:35 UTC
Niiiiiiiiice! Love the stories where they work together. Liked your style, little snippets of cases, showcasing their growing partnership and friendship. Really a great story! :)

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