Of Revelations, Theories and Unexpected Consequences [PG-13] for pencil_gal

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This story was generously written by a Pinch Hitter in a much shortened writing time. Their name will be revealed when we post our final Master List.

Title: Of Revelations, Theories and Unexpected Consequences
Author: in_my_blood
Rating: PG-13
Recipient: pencil_gal
Disclaimer: Nope, not mine. Nothing but the plot and occasional (just barely there if you look really

Comments

[drcjsnider]

Oh I love epilogue compliant Draco/Hermione stories. Their banter in this was really quite good and I enjoyed the concept of Draco trying to think of ways to shut her up... and of course Hermione figures out what he is going right away and retaliates in the best manner possible. Great stuff.

My favorite line: What was I supposed to do, wave goodbye to it as it passed me by?

[in_my_blood]

Yes, I love taking what JK Rowling gave us in the books and then turning around and going: "Yes, but, if we look at it like this...I mean, who knows what could happen!" :D

I'm truly glad you enjoyed their banter, as this is the first fic I've ever written and I was a little worried about whether that spark was apparent...

Thank you!

[mccargi]

This was fabulous. Sweet, funny, and snarky in a way that is very grown up. Loved it!

[in_my_blood]

Thank you for that! I really wanted the reader to see that they had grown up, even if some bad habits had stuck around, especially when it came to each other. :P

[margaritaabate]

Just fun. Really.

[in_my_blood]

Oh, thank you!

[rzzmg]

How adorably sweet! I really enjoyed their banter and the way you'd shown a remarked maturity in Draco, while highlighting that Hermione had a long way to go to catch up (which is normally just the opposite in most Post-Hogwarts Dramione fics). The use of the office intercom had me snarfing.

One error I caught:
our passed opinions - should be 'past'

Other than that, a delightfully clever story and done so well on such a short time-frame. Good job, mystery author!!!

[in_my_blood]

Thank you!! Being the first fic I've ever written, that all means a lot!

I'm glad you enjoyed the storyline, though given the time-frame, it came out with less depth and more fluff than I had originally envisioned! :P

[themsmine]

Nice story. I haven't read much HP fic, but I've found I have this little nagging DM/HG thing that is rearing its head. It's satisfied, for now. ;) The post epilogue thing is interesting, and I like to see how Draco has grown and that he actually has redeeming qualities. Enjoyed it. :)

[in_my_blood]

Yes, and now that it's gotten a taste, there's no way you can put that beast to bed, not for a while yet! *grins*

No, I've always read HP fanfic. And DM/HG in particular. I've tried other fandoms but noting's ever stuck, sadly! I'd love to expand, but...

And, oh, it makes me so very happy that my little piece satisfied!! (Especially considering this is the first fic I've ever written!)

I'm glad you could see those redeeming qualities in him. And really, that's what most DM/HG fanfic is about - a redeemed Draco Malfoy.

Thank you!!