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Death Note Anonymous Kink Meme

Oct 24, 2007 03:02

Welcome to the Death Note Anonymous Kink Meme!

How it works:

* Comment anonymously with a kinkfic request. All requests must contain a character or pairing/threesome/moresome (any combination of guys/girls/shinigami/whatever are OK, crossovers are fine too), and at least one kink. If you need inspiration, check out this huge list of kinks by eliade. ( Read more... )

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anonymous May 2 2010, 14:08:36 UTC

L sleep-humping Light, (like sleepwalking except it is humping). L doesn't wake up during the experience and has an orgasm while still sleeping. Light is very much awake the entire time. The aftermath is up to the author. Does L ever realize what he did, or does he think it was just a normal wet dream? Would prefer it if L is humping Light's knee or Light's hip.

anonymous June 2 2010, 20:18:07 UTC

Sounds seriously hot.

Thirsty Night 1 anonymous June 2 2010, 22:06:50 UTC

I apologize for mistakes with words, grammar and/or spelling in advance. As English is not my first language, please feel free to correct them. On the other hand, have fun with my very first fullfilled request here on kink meme ( ... )

Thirsty Night 2 anonymous June 2 2010, 22:07:45 UTC

L wet his lips quickly with his tongue and mumbled a few word of gibberish ( ... )

Re: Thirsty Night 2 anonymous June 3 2010, 00:16:16 UTC

GUH. If you are who I think you are... <3 lol.

No need to worry about English being your second language; your grammar is fine and your imagery is some of the better stuff on here.

HOT stuff. <3

Re: Thirsty Night 2 anonymous June 3 2010, 08:11:47 UTC

Author here.
Thanks for the comment, but I do not believe you know who I am, simply because I am normally just lurking around various fandoms and have only ever written three very short FFs in german for Harry Potter. And that was like for years ago.

But I am curious as to who you thought me to be...

Well, seems like it is readable :)

Re: Thirsty Night 2 anonymous June 3 2010, 14:26:55 UTC

No need to worry, anon, your English is excellent. :) I really liked this idea, and I think you wrote it very well. The attention to detail was simply delicious.

As for corrections, the only thing that stands out is that you ought to have used "surely" rather than "surly". It also might have been an idea to double-space your paragraphs in part 2, like you did in part 1. It gets a bit hard to read without the gaps. That last point is only small, though, and entirely unrelated to the language itself.

Re: Thirsty Night 2 anonymous June 3 2010, 20:45:27 UTC

Thanks! I did not catch that mistake...
Yeah, I forgot to add the gaps in the second part, unfortunately I cannot change them now.

Great, that you liked how I wrote it. I loved the idea too. Thank god for the requester asking for something so hot!

Re: Thirsty Night 2 anonymous June 3 2010, 20:16:14 UTC

This is extremely good. Don't worry about your English.

Re: Thirsty Night 2 anonymous June 3 2010, 21:19:03 UTC

I would love to know what happened once L checked those cameras!!! Can't u PLEASE write some more?

Re: Thirsty Night 2 anonymous June 3 2010, 21:37:28 UTC

Only if I get a really great idea as to what should happen next. I like this ending and would hate to destroy it by adding something lame.

Also I started writing something for another request here already (as I did request two kinks myself and I want to keep the balance), and I want to finish that one first, before starting something new.

On another side of things: I am really glad you liked Thirsty Night enough to ask for more. You just made my day/night!

Re: Thirsty Night 2 anonymous September 27 2010, 02:24:50 UTC

Hahaha I can just imagine that morning being very awkward.

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