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Orizuru: Epilogue

Oct 10, 2010 20:59

( EPILOGUE )

fic:slash, fic:rps, orizuru, pair:jensen/misha

Comments 94

bree_black October 26 2010, 03:50:03 UTC

Beautiful story. And best sex I've read in awhile. ;)

kriari October 26 2010, 10:11:49 UTC

Thanks so much!

blue_fjords October 26 2010, 10:47:58 UTC

I'm so happy for you, to see this posted, and see q's lovely artwork! It was such a pleasure reading this. You did such an amazing job of fully inhabiting your Jensen, and I loved Misha's creative outlet w/ the origami and the verses.

I want to re-read this at my leisure, but I have to say, I love your additions to the Epilogue!

kriari October 26 2010, 11:58:29 UTC

Thanks so much to you, too! It was still so rough when you read it, I felt guilty asking you to do so. :) There are quite a few places I spruced up. I think I scrapped all of Ch 2 fairly late in the game and started over, so there should be a decent amount of material that's new to you too!

Thanks again, and when you do have a chance to reread let me know how it stacks up :)

colazitron October 26 2010, 13:15:49 UTC

I'm in LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE <3. *drifts on happy cloud*

I always love your take on the both of them because you make them so human and flawed and lovable and awesome and I just want one for myself xD. I love how Jensen freaks out over the cranes (understandably, I think!) and I love how he doesn't seem to quite realize that underneath it all Misha's just a person. I love that it really WAS a prank gone a bit to far and that Misha owned up to it even though he didn't know how Jensen would react.

I just love everything about this. *____*

And I really want to do origami now. *scurries off to get some paper*

Absolutely gorgeous.

kriari October 27 2010, 01:23:43 UTC

\o/ I'm glad :)

I do try to make them human inasmuch as I can :D

Thank you so, so much. My desk at work is littered with little paper cranes, dragons, and frogs amongst other things.

Again, thank you!

deanawinchester October 26 2010, 20:56:59 UTC

Wow. This was a really gorgeous fic, I loved the slow build-up of their relationship :) Thank you for this!

kriari October 27 2010, 01:24:33 UTC

Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it :)

mysticwaters October 26 2010, 21:43:39 UTC

Awesome storytelling! I've been looking for a good Jensen/Misha fic to sink my teeth into and this definitely did not disappoint! Thanks for sharing! ♥

kriari October 27 2010, 01:27:06 UTC

*blush* Thank you, thank you, thank you! My pleasure to share :)