As Abraham

Apr 18, 2010 01:29

Title: As Abraham
Author: kadiel_krieger
Pairing: None
Rating: G
Wordcount: 1800
Warnings: Spoilers for 5.18
Disclaimer: They do not belong to me. I just borrow them.
A/N: I must blame first thank elizah_jane for telling me to STFU and stop trying to talk myself out of writing it and just spend the time writing it instead, and secondly devilyouwere for giving it a combing for ( Read more... )

char:dean, char:castiel, char:ofc, fic:gen

Leave a comment

Comments 64

qthelights April 18 2010, 09:38:31 UTC
I still love this :) Especially the way that the girl is so normal and so gradually creepy (okay, you say god-like, i say creepy.. *g* same diff).

Especially wish they would do this exactly on the show.

Poor Cas!

Reply

kriari April 18 2010, 14:37:28 UTC
All-knowingness is pretty creepy, ffs.

My gen tends to trend that way just because of personal preference. Lost moments fic has always been a favorite.

*cuddles him*

Reply


imisspadfoot21 April 18 2010, 09:41:44 UTC
Oooo, awesome! So vivid and I can actually see this happening in an episode. And I like how Cas still has faith, it's just changed from what he had it in. Very different type of coda than what I've read so far. Love it!

Thanks!!

Reply

kriari April 18 2010, 14:39:13 UTC
Thank you so much! If he didn't have faith that they'd be able to persevere it's be hard to imagine him carrying on. He's broken, but still fighting, which is how I love him.

No, thank you!!!

Reply


harper47 April 18 2010, 09:52:14 UTC
I wasn't even sure I was going to read this since I don't read a lot of gen and then you set the scene up so perfectly that I was reading before I knew it. Very well written, you created a realistic and vivid scene and chose your comments well. I really enjoyed this.

Reply

kriari April 18 2010, 14:40:19 UTC
That's fair, I don't write a lot of gen. Pretty much not ever :) Thank you you so, so much! Glad you enjoyed.

Reply


nyoka April 18 2010, 11:28:00 UTC
Oh, this is really really beautiful. Great choice of environment for an excellent character study of Castiel. And I loved your Castiel voice. And the little girl was just divine. (yes, divine!)

This is a well-imagined and enjoyable piece. Thank you for sharing.

Reply

kriari April 18 2010, 14:43:59 UTC
Thank you! ♥ It was a selfish choice. It felt it fitting that Castiel would return to the place he first stepped on the path he's now on to do his waiting. (Tee!)

Thanks again!

Reply


ibroketuesday April 18 2010, 12:35:25 UTC
This is one of my very favorite "Castiel finds God" fics. Lovely and quiet, and so sad -- Castiel's grief at losing Dean.

Reply

kriari April 18 2010, 14:47:03 UTC
Oh my. Thank you! I'm relieved to know I wasn't being too obtuse. I can be sometimes. They all need hugs and lots of therapy :)

Thank you again!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up