As Abraham

[docepax]

Title: As Abraham
Author: kadiel_krieger
Pairing: None
Rating: G
Wordcount: 1800
Warnings: Spoilers for 5.18
Disclaimer: They do not belong to me. I just borrow them.
A/N: I must blame first thank elizah_jane for telling me to STFU and stop trying to talk myself out of writing it and just spend the time writing it instead, and secondly devilyouwere for giving it a combing for

Comments

[blue_fjords]

Awesome. I love that he goes back to the same park bench, I love that he gets an answer, I love his determination. Beautiful and assured story-telling.

[kriari]

Thank you! I adore Castiel so, so much. I didn't know if I could pull it off, honestly. It's been a while since I wrote gen.

*blushes and grins* Thank you!

[blue_fjords]

Your gen was awesome!

(And I had to come say that I have the park bench in a story I just wrote, too, but I swear I wrote that bit before I read your story! I didn't want you to think I stole your bench!)

[kriari]

Thank you :)

(Don't worry, I don't think I have a monopoly on park benches. There are are hundreds upon thousands to go around Tee! *puts a pin in your piece to read in the morning, ffs*)

[eonism]

This is so good and so true to Cas, his searching and his determination. The language and tone are so beautiful and work so well here, especially in all the little character insights and the mention of Claire. It makes the scene feel vivid and natural, and very right.

Well done.

[kriari]

Thank you so much!

Glad you enjoyed :)

[lexhibition]

Oh, yes, this is lovely and bittersweet and then beautiful and tragically hopeful. This angel, this journey he's on - with all the betrayal and loss - to becoming his own entity without blind faith but with something so much stronger and more assured...you've summed up perfectly what I want from his arc. And the way Dean is knit in there, such a raw wound. So much &hearts

[kriari]

Right? I inevitably want him to become his own person, too. As much as it hurts my OTP heart I think he needed to see Dean was fragile in order to do that.

Thank you so much for reading and feeding!

[inksheddings]

Very much enjoyed.

[kriari]

Thank you!

[zoemathemata]

i really enjoyed this! i loved the feel of it.

[kriari]

Thank you so much! I wanted to keep it quiet and slightly ambiguous until the very end :)