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As Abraham

Apr 18, 2010 01:29

Title: As Abraham
Author: kadiel_krieger
Pairing: None
Rating: G
Wordcount: 1800
Warnings: Spoilers for 5.18
Disclaimer: They do not belong to me. I just borrow them.
A/N: I must blame first thank elizah_jane for telling me to STFU and stop trying to talk myself out of writing it and just spend the time writing it instead, and secondly devilyouwere for giving it a combing for ( Read more... )

char:dean, char:castiel, char:ofc, fic:gen

Comments 64

devilyouwere April 18 2010, 17:09:55 UTC

You already know how much I love this, but I'm just going to say it again: I love this. Even if my tired stupor where I am unable to fully appreciate the complexity and utter beauty of this.

Truly wonderful, darling. ♥

kriari April 18 2010, 21:02:54 UTC

♥ You are too good to me in spades, dearheart. I still intend to feed you. *firm nod*

Thank you so, so much!

squeemonster April 18 2010, 17:45:20 UTC

Ah, bb, this was simply gorgeous. Loved it.

kriari April 18 2010, 21:04:08 UTC

Danke! My heart hurts for Castiel right now, but I'm so glad he keeps trucking on in the face of it. Unwilling to bend despite all that's been taken from him.

Thank you, thank you!

mulder200 April 18 2010, 18:17:29 UTC

What a perfect coda to 5.18. On the one hand, it's sad to see Cas lose faith in those he holds dear but at that same time, he's learning what it means to be his own person. In short: he's growing up.

kriari April 18 2010, 21:05:41 UTC

Thank you so much! It's heartbreaking to watch a creature of faith lose that faith by no fault of his own. But yes, I completely agree. Part of growing up is breaking away and making your own decisions without undue influence of others.

Thank you again!

cassiopeia7 April 18 2010, 18:50:35 UTC

Oh . . . wow. This is purely GORGEOUS.

Quiet and thoughtful and a little bit creepy (gotta admit, that little girl scared me at first.) Poor Castiel, thinking that he's lost Dean to Michael . . . and that Michael will be Dean when he appears to rain destruction upon him . . . whoa. Just that thought breaks me.

Beautiful. This scene needs to happen on Show, like, ASAP.

kriari April 18 2010, 21:07:48 UTC

Thanks so much!

I'm glad! I intended her to be slightly creepy and otherworldly. I wanted people to be uncomfortable and questioning. Yay! I did my job. *hugs Castiel hard*

I'm so glad you enjoyed :)

madelf April 18 2010, 18:54:52 UTC

This is fab! I kind of love the little girl/god and her conversation with Castiel.

kriari April 18 2010, 21:09:07 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad :) I thought everyone might just go, "Buh? Who cares." I'm happy that's not the case.