As Abraham

Apr 18, 2010 01:29

Title: As Abraham
Author: kadiel_krieger
Pairing: None
Rating: G
Wordcount: 1800
Warnings: Spoilers for 5.18
Disclaimer: They do not belong to me. I just borrow them.
A/N: I must blame first thank elizah_jane for telling me to STFU and stop trying to talk myself out of writing it and just spend the time writing it instead, and secondly devilyouwere for giving it a combing for ( Read more... )

char:dean, char:castiel, char:ofc, fic:gen

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lisuli April 18 2010, 19:42:18 UTC
This is lovely.

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kriari April 18 2010, 21:09:31 UTC
Thank you so much!

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websandwhiskers April 18 2010, 19:48:50 UTC
This is really nicely done - the build-up is subtle enough to make it really effective when you realize just who the girl is. Great job!

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kriari April 18 2010, 21:10:31 UTC
Thank you! I am a fan of slow, steady builds especially in scenes like these, so I'm glad it worked for you :)

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colazitron April 18 2010, 20:21:51 UTC
Love this! The perfect kind of coda to the episode, I think ^^

And this: So even in the face of Dean's perfidy, he will still toe this new line because he believes in something beyond his Father now, beyond Dean. He believes their path is true and just and that if they do not stand between humanity and Lucifer's army, no one will. He believes. Just, THIS. It's exactly how I see Cas. He still believes, just in something else.

"Everyone has to grow up sometime, Castiel," Not sure I agree there xD Also: Castiel would probably be the most grown up angel of all of them (well, at least those we've met so far).

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kriari April 18 2010, 21:12:54 UTC
Thank you! It was hard to convince myself to actually do it since they pretty much gave us an official coda this week XD.

I hope it will be enough. Really, really.

AHAHA! Well, all big boy angels need to? Oh I totally agree the rest of them are running around like spoiled brats, but that doesn't mean Castiel should quit evolving and growing himself.

Thanks so much!

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colazitron April 19 2010, 15:59:59 UTC
I hope it will be enough. Really, really.

Me too, oh God, so much. Cas just yanks at my heartstrings each and every time he's on screen.

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claudiapriscus April 19 2010, 04:04:40 UTC
Ooh. Love this. It's just...perfect.

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kriari April 19 2010, 04:07:33 UTC
Thank you! So glad you enjoyed :)

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elliemurasaki April 19 2010, 04:17:02 UTC
*bounce*

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kriari April 19 2010, 04:25:28 UTC
*G* Good bounce, I take it?

Glad it hit the spot!

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