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dokssuri

Aspartame 4/8

Mar 23, 2013 04:28

Title: Aspartame
Pairing: ChunJae
Length: Chaptered
Summary: Jaejoong thinks he found just another sugar daddy to support him, but Yoochun is a different kind of sweet.

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pairing: yoochun/jaejoong, title: aspartame

Comments 22

ztarplay March 23 2013, 05:18:21 UTC

Awwww! Yoochun is bloody perfect! I feel so bad for Jaejoong though. And I want to slap Junsu silly. Hmph! Thank you for the sweet update author-nim!

P.S. Someone should tell Yoochun to pour white wine over that red. Just sayin'... wait... isn't he rich? Doesn't he have housekeepers to that for him? @_@

winged_kame March 23 2013, 05:30:47 UTC

Oh, developments! Loving this! Suspicious about Chun's situation still. But glad things ended with LSM.

dione_8 March 23 2013, 05:47:21 UTC

I love this story even more. Every words I read with slowly because I don't want to forget all of it :)
I like SoomanXJae... If it's possible, please more write about them in the next part.
Thank you very much *bow*

stmerry March 23 2013, 06:48:51 UTC

nice... love the end FINALLY!!!

blocassimere March 23 2013, 07:24:16 UTC

I think I've said this before, but I can really see myself loving this fic. Each chapter is getter better, visible development in their relationship, conflicts being discussed. Every chapter makes me crave for more, you know. And now, Jae kissed Yoochun. /heart beating faster/

Still suspicious over Yoochun's character. But I will keep my thoughts for now.

Thank you for updating! <3