Green Heart 3/3

[dokssuri]

Title: Green Heart
Pairing: Jaejoong/Junsu
Summary: Junsu needs to control all four elements to graduate as a mage, but the finals are coming up and he still hasn't found his fire. The popular student and fire specialist he's secretly had a crush on for almost a year suddenly approaches him.

Comments

[wrtchdexistence]

Thank you thank you for this lovely piece of work! I think It is so true that with love and belief we can achieve so much more than fear and loneliness. This verse is sooooooooo good~~~ please consider writing more of it someday~~~ maybe a little epilogue ten years after their graduation? I would really love to know what happened after this. \( ^o^ )/ Pretty please!!! I would love to be there for their graduation too! LOL XDDDDDDD

The verse of mages with superpowers from four elements is so creative! JaeSu fits the roles absolutely~~~ I can picture them perfectly! Jaejoong is so warm and encouraging and Junsu is so innocent so much so that he learnt to control fire after he fell in love. Jaejoong and Junsu will be awesome mages.

Thank you once more for this lovely piece of work! XOXOXOXXXXXXOXOXO

[attentionseekin]

i didn't see this story til now, but i just read it and it is sooo sooo cute~ i loved jaejoong's character, i felt so sad for junsu so i'm glad that junsu was able to control the fire in the end, and that it was uniquely green~
(^_^)v

[sunshinelike]

I have to comment because I've read this story in one go and it's the best Jaesu I've read recently. Everything about it is amazing, from the idea of mages and elements to the flow of the whole story. I can actually relate to Junsu here and Jaejoong is such a great boyfriend himself. I'd be really really happy to read more Jaesu from you in the future <3

[jrocklover1973]

That is adorable! Good, I worried that Junsu might never be able to do fire. Green flames? That's awesome! And its cute that they are together. *-*

[chromaticwish]

ohhhh I love this universe so much. This was beautiful -- from start to finish. I lovelove the idea of Junsu having green hair and being all in tune with nature and the living and JJ bringing out that fire within him. So beautiful. I enjoy your writing so much. This was great.