Ice Cream ;; drabble

[bestlies]

Title; Ice Cream
Fandom/Pairing; Kang Jeremy/Go Mi Nyu
Rating; PG
Summary; Ice cream doesn't taste very good when you're alone.

Comments

[shihan_ai]

awww jeremy and "mi nam" always had a relationship that i found very interesting and the scene in the bus with jeremy had me tearing

this was very short, but I really liked it <3

[bestlies]

I love their relationship. Jeremy was my favourite part of the show. I cried watching the bus scene. It just about killed me.

I'm glad you liked it, thank you. It didn't turn out how I was planning it to (I wasn't planning on the girl to be Mi Nyu) but I liked how it turned out anyway. Thank you.

Ice Cream: comment

[pipu_com]

The first sentence gets the reader - it's a painful statement.

The short and precise developement of Jeremy's emotion are also well done.

"It while he’s eating ice cream that he decides to give up on love."

You also managed well, to connect the active and the emotional part, I liked that. ^^

His cold reaction towards Mi Nyu leaves you with a sad feeling.

Anyway, I nice, short scene and with a very good writing style. ^^

Greetings from the cold

Re: Ice Cream: comment

[bestlies]

Thank you so, so much.This was such a great comment, it means a lot to me. Thank you lots. I'm really glad you liked it.

Re: Ice Cream: comment - you're welcome ^^

[pipu_com]

You're welcome. ^^
I'm writing a lot, too, so I can understand very good, how happy a simple comment can make the author. ^^

I'm also always dance around because of joy, when I'm getting a comment on my fanfictions, that's why I also like commenting longer than usual. ^^

I would like to read more of your work, even though I don't know the fandom. But if your writing style is that good, you can make EVERY fandom for everyone enjoyable. ^^ I hope, you'll write soon more about YaB.

Do you already know about my fanfiction script of YaB, a special episode?
-> http://pipu-com.livejournal.com/33090.html#cutid1
Would be glad, if you give it a try and let me know your opinion. ^^ But my English isn't perfect yet. ^^

Read you soon
PB

Re: Ice Cream: comment - you&#39;re welcome ^^

[bestlies]

Yeah, honestly. It makes all the difference. It's so nice to have someone say anything.

haha, yeah. Again, I understand that. I try to leave long comments, but it always just depends on how much time I have and what's going on and such. But once I got seventeen comments on one of my stories that I was dancing around my room for twenty minutes. It was the best.

haha, I have some really weird fandoms that I like, but I hope you'll enjoy anything you bother reading about. My style isn't that good, I don't know what you're talking abouttttt, haha. I do plan on it, I just need more time!

I do, I just haven't gotten around to read it yet. I will, though, for sure. Don't worry about the English. If you need any help, though, I'd love to give it.

[mawaru_berry]

Ah, this is so…I don't know how to describe it. Sad doesn't seem like a good enough emotion to use. Gah alsdhkjfhg *at a loss for proper vocabulary*

I really need to finish You're Beautiful XD I haven't yet!

<3

[bestlies]

haha, thank you, darling.

YOU DO. If you don't, Imma beat you up, all right?

Ice cream and love

[joeydragonlady]

I guess it woldn't be so hard to equate ice cream and love. I love that Jeremy
dealt with his hurt feelings the Jeremy way. Although it is hard for him
he presses on. Thanks for giving us a view of how Jeremy feels.

Keep writing.

Re: Ice cream and love

[bestlies]

I love ice cream, so I think it could work, especially for Jeremy. I do, too, because that's who he is and he just needs to deal with it. No, thank you for reading.

[kmrawr]

That was. So sad. Idk. It just reminded me of that one crying scene on the bus...Episode 15? Yeahhh, Jeremy D:

[bestlies]

Yeah, that's kind of where I got the idea from. And just the whole feelings that the two together had.