Fic: Of Storm Clouds and Bite Marks

Jan 04, 2011 16:44

 Title: Of Storm Clouds and Bite Marks
Summary: During the peak of a desolate fall storm, Satou finds room to be creative amongst the dreariest of settings by indulging in his possessive tendencies.
Fandom: Aitsu no Daihonmei
Pairing: Satou/Yoshida
Rating: NC-17 (but still not graphic enough for my liking.)
Warnings: Sex, homosexuals, biting kink, ( Read more... )

pairing: satou x yoshida, fandom: aitsu no daihonmei

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doodlelover January 10 2011, 14:39:42 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for reading~! :D

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shiro_chan_101 January 5 2011, 23:16:48 UTC
ZOMG. This was too cute ^_^ I really enjoyed reading this!
As for suggestions...maybe they could go on a date?

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nyokosenpai January 6 2011, 21:27:10 UTC
Sorry for the double post, but have you ever thought about writing something where Satou visits Yoshida's house for once?

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xploded_tb January 10 2011, 13:36:38 UTC
Seconding nyokosenpai here. I would like to see fan-made Yoshida's dad and mom's reaction towards Satou in general. :3

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doodlelover January 10 2011, 14:42:47 UTC
!! PERFECT IDEA. The only thing daunting about it would be getting the reactions right without it being too unorthodox. But then again, this it Aitsu; everything is that way. Pfft.

Thank you for the suggestion and the comment! I'm glad you liked~!

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nyokosenpai January 6 2011, 21:26:13 UTC
This is completely random, but have you ever thought of writing a funny drabble about Torachin and Yamanaka? Yamanaka's such a vain, arrogant perv and even sometimes gets to Torachin sometimes, but Tora has no problem punching his lights out when he needs to.

LOL Now THAT would be awesome.

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doodlelover January 10 2011, 14:45:24 UTC
Torachin~ -see icon for my expression whenever I see him mentioned- I agree! Of course I have. XD Just nothing seems exciting enough, or I feel like I'd just be repeating whatever's already been shown in the manga because I'm uncreative. OTL But I have started a few fics with them. XD I love them too much not to.

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mellusia January 7 2011, 19:32:04 UTC
Oooh, what a steamy story. I really liked how you had the setting in the future, showing the longevity of their relationship. I'm trying to imagine salary-man Yoshida now xD

Really, great writing. Love to read more ^^

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doodlelover January 10 2011, 14:48:42 UTC
(Just wanted to say, I love your icon! XD It's so true it hurts.)

I admit, most of the inspiration for this story was because I get fangirly when I picture them years down the line, being all domestic and cute and other normally boring things (like good morning kisses! Or complaining about laundry!)

........how on Earth did this end up as porn, I wonder? >_>;;

Thank you! And I hope you will. :D

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alinic January 8 2011, 06:33:35 UTC
Oh nice and hot, just like I like my fics ^_^ You did a wonderful job. I like how they both matured and grew up but never really changed all that much. I especially like the imagery you painted, really great can't wait to read more if you decide to continue.

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doodlelover January 10 2011, 14:50:52 UTC
All in all, they're still immature men even with age. And that is why I love their goofy asses so dearly. <3 Of course I'll continue! My obsessions don't often fade away that quickly.

Thank you for the comment!

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