Fic: Of Storm Clouds and Bite Marks

[doodlelover]

 Title: Of Storm Clouds and Bite Marks
Summary: During the peak of a desolate fall storm, Satou finds room to be creative amongst the dreariest of settings by indulging in his possessive tendencies.
Fandom: Aitsu no Daihonmei
Pairing: Satou/Yoshida
Rating: NC-17 (but still not graphic enough for my liking.)
Warnings: Sex, homosexuals, biting kink,

Comments

[milky_haven]

OMG This is so hawt. I'm in love!

[doodlelover]

At first, this was a flattering comment that I proceeded to clutch to my bosom like I would any other.

Then I saw your icon. And it became the highlight of my morning.

Thank you! XD

[xploded_tb]

Pretty emotions! Another job well done~ If only if I could write something like this... xD Sorry for the late comments...

Though, you seem to have a little bit of run-on sentence habit. ^^;;

Here: Yoshida’s hands, unable to do anything but [...] sheen of pleasure Satou brought upon them.

You kinda lost me there a little. xD Or maybe it's only just me...

[doodlelover]

I LIKE LATE COMMENTS. They remind me I have things to reply to! XD

Run-on sentences are my brain's way of telling me it hates periods. I shall fix those nasty errors!

...Having my own porn sentence being quoted back at me is sdl;sdfsdf -embarrassed-

Thank you, bb! I'm glad you liked it~~!

[xploded_tb]

IEJFIWJFEIWIF XD I realized I quoted really very porn-ish sentences... :3

It's still good! Still another one awesome SatouYoshida, so keep up the work~ Like you said, nastttyyyyyy run-on. Maybe I'm the only one who just gets lost in that sea of words. :X

[doodlelover]

IT'S PROBABLY BECAUSE EVERYTHING WAS BASICALLY PORN XD

No, I definitely get lost in it too. Which is probably why they exist because I'm too lazy to go back and break them up. >_>;; Too preoccupied with getting my hands to work faster than my brain. .....and reluctant to read my own porn again. sld;askndasd