You & I (Embrace in the Far Away Dream)

[dorkii_simba]

Title: You and I (Embrace in the Far Away Dream)
Genre: AU Fantasy
Rating: PG
Pairing: JaeMin
Length: 5/12?
Warning: Unbeta-ed
Summary: Little JaeJoong wants to be an angel. “If I can return all of your tears back into the sea, will the sins and pain be forgotten too?” (Butterfly Kiss Rave)

1A / 1B / 2A / Interlude 1

Comments

[jaeminism]

OMG! Sorry for the late comment. I thought I commented before...:/ Ahh anyways...

I have a complain. WHY IS YOUR UPDATE SO SHORT? Not fair ok? Don't do this to us.

So Jae was dreaming about the future? Min will leave heaven to be with Jae?

Please update soon. And it better be a long update next time.

[dorkii_simba]

DDD:
i apologize for the short update? well not really haha "x]
:] you're pretty much right about the dream & changmin leaving heaven to be with jae. but it's not so much of the future, but the present. :] (if that makes any sense :P)

thank you darling & i hate to break it to you, but it definitely isn't a long one.
(honestly, i suck at long updates. they drain my brain juices away.)

[jaeminism]

Then u better make the fic longer ok? Only 12 chapters won't do with this short updates... Booo...:P

[dorkii_simba]

if it's possible "x]

[rennie_88]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHh! what!!!!!!! so he can like connect to the heaven place through his dreams???????? but they cant hurt him there right??
and crying cuz he thinks he's worthless TT oh my poor heart... TT plz plz let that be his handsome guardian!min come to comfort himmmm~~~ *_* ahhg~
u got so many feelings and vivid images into such a short piece, its amazing <3 love love love it and always wanting more!
very curious how this has turned around on u~? its already super interesting idea tho! :)

[dorkii_simba]

haha i like your interpretation of the dream, but it's just a dream jae is having of the future/present. nothing too dramatic & i'm pretty sure they won't be able to hurt him in any way even if they wanted to. i mean, changmin would probably kick them - don'tcha think? ;]

aw i'm flattered, really. :D i'm glad you like this & i hope the future parts won't disappoint you. :]

& well to answer you question, jae was suppose to find drawings at his school. weird, i know, but i'm planning to post up the original outline at the end of the story. that way :] you and anyone else can see how this ficlet first started out.

thank you darling! ♥

[rennie_88]

i like to read into dreams too much maybe XD but if u mean he's dreaming future/present then it will happen later/has happened actually? :o

i hope min would do that for him hehe! this guardian angel thing is so lovely i get all enraptured just thinking abt it XD lol

that would be awesome if i shared the outline later ~ cuz a story can be a totally dif story just with that ^^ i like this topic a lot too so.. yea.. :) feed my imagination plz XDDD kk

[dorkii_simba]

oh yes, i definitely will be sharing the outline @ the end of the story. :]

[chloe1910]

EH? Don't tell me because Changmin wanted to protect him, he's chosen to be a human instead? Angels should not have black feathers right? So I don't think it was Yoochun?

I know it's a dream but I think that it's real and that actually, the black feathered (demon?) went into Jaejoong dream.

[dorkii_simba]

i like how you notice the black feather :]. but i suppose in this angel-world i have created, the colors of their wings don't really matter. i think, for me, angels should be determined by the way how they are (treating other people, emotionally, physically, etc). :] i mean, that's just the way how i'd like to view things? (if that makes any sense whatsoever).

thank you for reading & commenting darling! ♥

[chloe1910]

oh, the colors of their wings don't matter in this story? ok, I'll remember that.