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dorothy_in_oz

Memories Of Our Summers AS/S

Jul 10, 2008 16:41

Prompt(s): Sunblock/ tanning lotion, Summer job, Copious amounts of alcohol, Lemonade, Tree house, lyrics from Cruel Summer by Bananarama, Confession (Special bonus prompt)
Title: Memories Of Our Summers
Author: Dorothy Gale
Beta: Toto. Any remaining mistakes are my own.
Length: 3711 words
Rating: R for language and dark themes.
Summary: What ( Read more... )

as/s fic, angst

Comments 21

okydoky July 10 2008, 15:07:30 UTC

Wow, that was amazing, but you've left me kinda speechless, so I'll leave you with a ♥

dorothy_in_oz July 10 2008, 15:33:28 UTC

I don't know if leaving you speechless is good or bad, but I'll take it's good so thanks for the love!

okydoky July 10 2008, 15:34:50 UTC

Oh it was definitely good, don't worry about that :)

I really enjoyed it, it was refreshing to read something with a different, more sombre tone :)

dorothy_in_oz July 10 2008, 15:51:34 UTC

Angst is what I love the most, and I've been told that I write it far better than fluff. Maybe from now on you'll see a different side of this pairing - less sunshine and more troubled kids!

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dorothy_in_oz July 10 2008, 16:12:57 UTC

*blushes*

This is probably one of the best comments I've ever received, and though I'm pretty new here I've been writing for half my life. Thank you very much for putting a big smile on my face.

Harry is really dark here. He wanted a family, and now that he has one of his own, he doesn't want anyone to steal it from him. However, his methods are really not orthodox, but hey, he's the Saviour, he can do anything he wants!

betelin_notecor July 10 2008, 16:20:11 UTC

Creepy, creepy, creepy! Totally nightmare inducing!

I loved it! Excellent job! :)

dorothy_in_oz July 10 2008, 16:30:35 UTC

It was aimed to make you feel like having nightmares!

Thanks for the love!

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dorothy_in_oz July 11 2008, 08:46:09 UTC

Your icon! *loves*

Thanks for your words. Poor Scorpius didn't stand a chance, but I promise next time I won't kill him...

pirateninjax July 11 2008, 02:18:54 UTC

HARRY YOU ARE POSSESSED.

and omg. what is it with these murdering potters?! are they out to scare the shit out of me?! *hides with-OMG NO BODY TO HIDE WITH* D=

i started freaking out when he talked about the snake and then when he talked about killing i was like NOOOO HARRY YOU MORON! DON'T KILL SCORPIUS. because, why would i think it was draco when harry and ginny were the ones who freaked out so much and banned albus' bff just because they were moving in together and omg i hope that harry doesn't get off scotch free or that the spell al performed to send him wherever takes out harry too.

i apologize for the rambling.

dorothy_in_oz July 11 2008, 08:47:49 UTC

The murdering Potters will chase you for always!

I tried to confuse my readers by making Draco and Harry both talk about snakes, but it seems everyone thought it was Harry all along!

Don't apologize for rambling, I LOVE it when my writing makes people talk and talk for hours.

pirateninjax July 11 2008, 20:01:49 UTC

this is the second one that i've read with the dark side of the potters coming out, although the first one (an ass fest fic) scared the beejezus out of me. it was sooo creepy.

haha i figured some was draco but the killing part was all harry for me. that bastard.

i ramble a lot so be prepared if i read anything else. lol