This battle

Sep 28, 2005 21:23

I like being naked now, it's really relaxing and pleasent.

I had an extremley emotional day )

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anonymous September 29 2005, 14:54:12 UTC
use the word concrete more in the first sentence ( ... )

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dosh_heif September 29 2005, 15:16:42 UTC
Yeah, I make really idiotic spelling mistakes all the damn time, no joke. Souls and soles. Hahaha.

The point that I was making about the trees is that the storm was making them insane looking, thus my feeling of being in a differnet world and the use of the word maniacle, I didn't find it necessary to go back and explain them more.

Galloping and roaring I used together to convey the sense of feriocity, I chose 'galloping' for the feeling of speed and 'roar' for the sound the rain was making hitting the ground.

And as far as the handle goes, it really was a gold handle and it really did all happen to me sooo I tried making it as close to the truth as possible.

And I don't hate you at all, I appreciate the fact that you actually did what I asked and critisized what I wrote. I just figured I'd explain myself and all, you knowwwww.

My biggest fan?!! Who are you?

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idunnnnno September 30 2005, 00:48:52 UTC
yeah... try not to wear unda-weah's then you'll feel relaxed and free lol. 8)

the flhs web page thing yuo designed is too small make it bigger or send it to me lol

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dosh_heif September 30 2005, 01:59:40 UTC
Hahah its really gay. And I really should keep on wearing underwear, I'm a girl and all, you know, we have different parts!

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