unconditionally onew

Apr 21, 2009 17:59

unconditionally onew
onew/key
pg
a/n. for applesu, the key to my onew ♥ also, first shinee fic, omg. D: feel free to let me know what you think of characterization (or anything, really). it really helps a first-timer! :))

unconditionally onew )

fandom: shinee, pairing: onew/key

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theia88 April 22 2009, 01:37:03 UTC
Whoa! I love this fic, seriously....!!!
I can't believe it's ur shinee fanfic O_O
Oh, both jinki and kibum are so cute...i can't resist this onkey cuteness overload...love every part of this fic ^^
you made my day!

Write more onkey, babe
I need more onkey fic... >.

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xiahtic April 24 2009, 07:15:11 UTC
heee, thank you so much omg ♥!! :">

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xiahtic April 24 2009, 07:15:34 UTC
skldjf crying THANK YOUUUU ♥ *o*

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scylladakylla April 22 2009, 02:19:22 UTC
Alksjdflkjsldkfsdf I am speechless. Okay, not, because now I'm going to quote your fic back at you and spazz like a spazzy thing.

And I love the small details you include, like Kibum waggling his fingers to say hello, because HE WOULD TOTALLY DO THAT. And, of course, Onew tripping over everything in sight. The boy is SO AWKWARD, I LOVE IT. Alskjdflsdf the watering hole metaphor is so apt, Bling the OBNOXIOUS ELEPHANT. Onkey are perfect here, Onew is all sorts of spazzing fail and confused by everything and Key is completely unwilling to say how he actually feels and is snarky and confident but vulnerable at the same time. ♥

Despite what the outside world thinks, Jinki's not... well, dumb or anything. Though, he does have to admit, he has more than a few slip-ups on a daily basis and they're not that far between each other.
Cries, this is totally how Onew would justify his behavior to himself.

Minho shrugs, pushing Jinki forward. "I figure, if two people like each other, it really shouldn't matter if they're both boys or both girls ( ... )

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xiahtic April 24 2009, 07:16:17 UTC
askljdfklsj sobs i love this comment omg ♥♥ thank youuuu ;;<3

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lyto April 22 2009, 05:43:47 UTC
LOL Fish out of water~

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xiahtic April 24 2009, 07:16:34 UTC
haha, thank you for reading :3

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redpicturesque April 22 2009, 06:03:15 UTC
Love this fic! Omma and Appa :D Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside hunn! :D

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xiahtic April 24 2009, 07:16:49 UTC
heee, thanks for reading and commenting!! <3 :))))

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