unconditionally onew

Apr 21, 2009 17:59

unconditionally onew
onew/key
pg
a/n. for applesu, the key to my onew ♥ also, first shinee fic, omg. D: feel free to let me know what you think of characterization (or anything, really). it really helps a first-timer! :))

unconditionally onew )

fandom: shinee, pairing: onew/key

Leave a comment

Comments 51

lily_ina April 22 2009, 21:09:32 UTC
AW! This is too cute!!! *dies*

I loved it!!! X3

Thank you so much for sharing!!!!

Reply

xiahtic April 24 2009, 07:19:36 UTC
aww, thank YOU for reading :))) ♥~

Reply


pumadragon April 22 2009, 21:43:16 UTC
YOU WIN. ;o;
asdf cries you are awesome mem's forever asdfasdfasdfasdfasdf

Reply

xiahtic April 24 2009, 07:19:51 UTC
kjsdf cries thank you so much ;;♥!!!!

Reply


bambayahh April 23 2009, 00:44:04 UTC
lmfao, totally Jinki to say a pickup line AFTER they've already got everything situated. LOL.

you've seriously characterized Jinki perfectly :O
seriously adorable xD

loved this ♥

Reply

xiahtic April 24 2009, 07:20:36 UTC
thank you so much! :"> considering i just "officially" got into fandom, i'm really pleased to hear that :3

Reply


volatileflame April 23 2009, 03:50:49 UTC
haha~ oh Onew XD

so fabulous <3

Reply

xiahtic April 24 2009, 07:21:24 UTC
haha, thank youuu ♥ :)

Reply


lizann16 April 23 2009, 07:33:37 UTC
"Did it hurt?" Jinki asks.

"Um," Kibum says, confused, "Did what hurt? The kiss? Because yeah, you kind of got teeth-happy towards the end there."

Jinki flushes. "Er, no, I meant did it hurt when you fell out of heaven."

Kibum sighs loudly. "Aigoo. Come here, I need to shut you up," he says, pulling Jinki into a kiss.

OMONAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!! kyaaaah!!!! i know i look like an idiot when i read the ending... i was like grinning wildly LOLOL you need to feed us more onkey fics!! you're so good!! laaah~~~ feeed meeeee onkey fics! *turned into an onkey monster* XDDD

Reply

xiahtic April 24 2009, 07:21:51 UTC
thank you so much :))) ♥!!!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up