unconditionally onew onew/key pg a/n. for applesu, the key to my onew ♥ also, first shinee fic, omg. D: feel free to let me know what you think of characterization (or anything, really). it really helps a first-timer! :))
"Um," Kibum says, confused, "Did what hurt? The kiss? Because yeah, you kind of got teeth-happy towards the end there."
Jinki flushes. "Er, no, I meant did it hurt when you fell out of heaven."
Kibum sighs loudly. "Aigoo. Come here, I need to shut you up," he says, pulling Jinki into a kiss.
OMONAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!! kyaaaah!!!! i know i look like an idiot when i read the ending... i was like grinning wildly LOLOL you need to feed us more onkey fics!! you're so good!! laaah~~~ feeed meeeee onkey fics! *turned into an onkey monster* XDDD
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I loved it!!! X3
Thank you so much for sharing!!!!
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you've seriously characterized Jinki perfectly :O
seriously adorable xD
loved this ♥
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so fabulous <3
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"Um," Kibum says, confused, "Did what hurt? The kiss? Because yeah, you kind of got teeth-happy towards the end there."
Jinki flushes. "Er, no, I meant did it hurt when you fell out of heaven."
Kibum sighs loudly. "Aigoo. Come here, I need to shut you up," he says, pulling Jinki into a kiss.
OMONAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!! kyaaaah!!!! i know i look like an idiot when i read the ending... i was like grinning wildly LOLOL you need to feed us more onkey fics!! you're so good!! laaah~~~ feeed meeeee onkey fics! *turned into an onkey monster* XDDD
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