eyes wide shut

Dec 03, 2010 02:23

eyes wide shut
minho/key
pg-13 for language
3,124w
warnings: implied character death
a/n: for pause ♥ this was originally for my five things meme below, but as you can see it kind of got away with me. i'm still trying to figure key out, so if there's anything at all off to you about my characterization, feel free to point it out. i'd love the advice ( Read more... )

fandom: shinee, pairing: minho/key

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onew December 3 2010, 08:51:24 UTC

Brb reading this awesome fic.

"you're kim kibum, you like me. and i like you, too."
Dying, Jamie. DYING! I love how this sounds so real and raw. I haven't seen cheesy lines used so well in so long, either! Gj, Jamie. Just that. Good job :) ♥

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lovescone December 5 2010, 06:18:17 UTC
cries, thank you, reeza ♥ double thanks, actually, for listening to me whine and helping me with silly little shinee stuff i should know ;___; ♥

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jonghyun December 3 2010, 10:15:01 UTC

♥♥♥ i missed reading minkey~

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lovescone December 5 2010, 06:18:53 UTC
well, i'm glad i could give you a little something to read for them~ thanks for reading :) ♥!

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chocolatos December 3 2010, 11:19:54 UTC
oh my, My MinKey =))or it's better be Our MinKey? =)) whatever i like this

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lovescone December 5 2010, 06:19:12 UTC
hehe, thank you so much :3 ♥♥

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cuvier December 3 2010, 12:56:38 UTC
ahhhh omg :') okay first off this really reminded me of that one christmas story, the one with the ghost of christmas past etc.?? which means somewhere in this story there is a message that minho needs to get, and get it he does. if you're still pondering about key's characterisation then imo you haven't much to worry about, i love the way he is here -- obstinate and stubborn and blunt but also vulnerable, at the end where he's talking to minho, and also in part 3 where he admits that he's selfish and he's scared. that broke my heart, omg.

this was a great read -- thanks for sharing!! ♥

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lovescone December 5 2010, 06:20:06 UTC
sobs, yeah i actually didn't even think about that until this comment and then i was like LOL GJ SELF!! lsdfs but omg thank you so much, i'm always so worried about characterization, so this helps ease those a little. ♥♥

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saracupcaked December 3 2010, 13:28:10 UTC
there's never enough minkey in fandom and good minkey is even rarer, so I'm glad you decided to write something like this! I really like the fact it's set in different dimensions yet the characters are still them. this is creative and refreshing ♥

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lovescone December 5 2010, 06:20:57 UTC
ahh, thank you so much!!! ♥ i'm rly glad you liked it. :3

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