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downfall18

comment please, and be honest

Apr 25, 2005 19:41

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this is cory pope commenting anonymous April 26 2005, 01:21:14 UTC

hey im guessing that u want me to be honest because these are lyrics u wrote..... and i will be honest they're pretty damn good............but i dont have muchto say cuz im busy but good job and ill write again later......

I'm Steve Sierra Bitch buried_alone April 26 2005, 01:38:00 UTC

Stevie, I like your last one better. I totaly like the use of words(some that you prolli dont know the meanings of)haha. Thats really cool. As for this one, its good but i dont like the repetition. They are really good for just starting tho. Keep writing man.

. DUSTIN-ism

namteews April 27 2005, 01:47:17 UTC

HEY PLAYA
IM COMMENTING

-----<3mel

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anonymous June 16 2005, 06:02:09 UTC

like he's the veteran writer, "kiddo"...sounds like what babe ruth would say to a little leaguer, he doesnt realize his writing sucks

pixie_dust612 May 19 2005, 02:06:29 UTC

hey ghetto gangsta----
the shocker is a' comin' for youuuu.
SLUUUUT.
____<3me