inhale, exhale. ; onew x key x ot5 ; pg-13

[doyouknowwhy]

"inhale, exhale.
one-shot / onew x key x ot5 / pg 13 / 1335 words

→ jinki waits, waits, waits for kibum to come while he counts the limitless drops on his window pane, counts the beats of his high heart.

Comments

[rikli]

b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l

"eight hundred," kibum whispered, lips moving slowly and breath enticing jinki. "eight hundred, fifty one raindrops on that glass pane," he continued, now conspicuously eyeing his flawless face. jinki saw his own reflection in his eyes, burning eyes that he knew wanted him as well.

<3

it felt like reading a poem

glad ur back, i rly hope to read more of ur works now :)

[doyouknowwhy]

no, you're beautiful. 8D
i'm happy and might as well say i'm excited to be back. ♥

i hope you would be there when i continue writing. thank you for the wonderful comment, bb!

[rikli]

ohh <3 for sure, i will stalk you from now on then :D

[doyouknowwhy]

; ~; you're all so kind. waylt? thank you, thank you, thank you! /tacklehugs.

[volatileflame]

beautiful <3

[doyouknowwhy]

thank you! you're beautiful as well, bb. ♥

[namae_nai]

this is heavenly.
D:

[doyouknowwhy]

wow, ; ~; i never thought it would be heavenly.

oh, bb, why put a "D:" face? you make me weary and flattered at the same time. ♥ i'll give you a heart for reading. thank you!

[namae_nai]

"D:" because I'm disturbed by the utter perfection this fanfic is, and maybe because I really do want more of that, but it's so short, and I know that probably you won't be making any soon, and maybe because almost at the same time I watched that drunk-jongkey-almost-making-out-while-partying video and I was like 'oh yeah, whenever the perfect onkey fic comes out, jongkey grow a little more insane', and maybe it was something else but I don't remember anymore.

but thank you for the heart ♥

[doyouknowwhy]

bb, you have no idea how much i'm flattered. stop, really. /flushed.

i am crammed with school work and it hurts knowing the fact that balancing my academics and writing fiction is ridiculously tough, to the point that i may not be able to post up anything. i will be writing soon (and posting!), i promise.

hjhjfdflkh, jongkey is ridiculous. no, they are the cockblock to onkey. ; ~; the insanity's the reason why i'm madly in love jongkey; with the addition of keysha and all his diva-ness. and it hurts because i want more of onew with key. then again, onkey's just perfect for ~marriage~ and jongkey stands out from all of them, considering every aspect (if you know what mean). my otp shipping heart says,

D:
jonghyun's such a whore. >D or maybe onew should just stay with his chicken.

you're welcome. 8D

[ethanlovesoreos]

BAWWWWWW ;~~~~;
soooooo sweet. SAKFJSADJLSAJFSAJDSAD.

i love how Jinki thinks Kibum's always missing when you needed him. you just pictured how couples reaaaallly pertain their love ones. well, not couples, but maybe those who try to be. XDDD

SSSSOOOOO AWESOME. &hearts

[doyouknowwhy]

; ~; i'm glad you enjoyed it, assuming from your incoherence.

yes, i still believe in their umma-appa relationship even if they're strongly showing that one-sided love affair. ♥♥

thank you for reading!

[ahmins3]

[doyouknowwhy]

i never expected it to be poetic as i have just returned to writing after quite a long absence. totally deep, maybe, yes. haha, thank you, i guess.

yes, i couldn't picture jinki smoking pot as well. seeing his tofu face and his amazing charms, i know he would never. i used it for the story to progress as i would like it to and thank you for voicing out your thoughts! these comment really help in future works! ♥

thank you for the wonderful comment, bb! i'm deeply thankful that you liked it!