Pairing: Lily/James
Author: Dr. Fawkes
Disclaimer: Yeah. Yeah. I’m J.K. Rowling, and I’m writing these one-shots because I’ve nothing better to do. And if you believe that, you deserve a special place in Mrs. Norris’s rice bowl.
Other Notes: This is a one-shot in a series called “CURTAIN”. (I wrote this ages ago, but I’m posting it late.)
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And suddenly, it strikes James with the intensity of a supernova, that they are alone on this forgotten beach, all alone beneath a lazy midsummer blue sky. They are all alone by the laughing sea, and she belongs to him.
I have no clear idea why I adore that part so much. If only I had your beautiful way with words, I could describe in detail just how captivating this was. Alas, I don't. I have the strangest affinity with the ocean, and I am thrilled at how you incorporated it into this story as if it were a character in itself, which I suppose it was.
I bow down and worship....
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Oh, my goodness! I'm all red with pleasure. Such lovely words...*Sighs dramatically* ^_^
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I love that description of the Irish sea--
I especially love the Irish Sea. It is so wild and untamed, which is how I prefer it to be, crashing against the sand, caring for nothing or no one in an almost tenacious manner and roaring as if announcing it's presence. It gives me such a feeling of freedom.
I must go down to the sea again.
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i've been reading too many humour fics lately (shocking, i know... one would think you could never get too many) and this has been refreshing. kind of like that iced tea you get on a hot humid day in summer after swimming for hours... the sweet kind, not the bitter kind that actually tastes like tea.
oh dear. i wish i had your gift for words, because that sentence just came out all wrong... but i think you'll get it.
sweet and refreshing.
“I love you, Mrs. P.,” he says, his heart contracting painfully.
When i read that... my heart contracted painfully too. (collective "awww" at Dr. Fawkes' beautiful sentence above).
sniff.
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You like humour fanfics? Ditto for me.
Have you tried Beedaily's Commentarius? Its utterly hilarious.
Oh, and you can also try out my [L/J] fic "Memoirs of a Pixie" at this link-
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2674690/1/
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One word - update! sheesh...
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