Comments | dreamer1789: FMA [Drabble:] 'And really bad eggs'

dreamer1789

FMA [Drabble:] 'And really bad eggs'

Aug 05, 2011 23:38

All but prompted by evil-little-dog, inspired by her post.

A/N: Because I couldn't resist. Written while sleep-deprived. Crack. Dedicated to ELD. XD

( They were the very finest of H.R.M. Queen Elizabeth's navy. Granted, born and bred as straight and true Amestrians they were also the first and only of said newly formed Marine Corps... )

series: fullmetal alchemist, fanfic

Comments 10

radcat38 August 5 2011, 21:49:41 UTC

Oh, that was good. I loved the style that you wrote it in and loved being able to do who everyone was by the clues you left. Missed Riza being Elizabeth though..but she can more than handle the job. Women power!!!
Wonder if Ed and Al were part of the crew but were mistaken for women..hahaaahhahaa...
Good job. Today is my bday and happy to see you posting!!
cat

dreamer1789 August 6 2011, 07:04:38 UTC

Many thanks! ^^ Yup, girl power was the whole drive behind the non-plot here. ;) Hmm, Ed and Al in drag? XD Whatever you like, I say. IN my head they were curiously absent during this tiny lunatic moment (and glad for it), but if they were fugitives (and wouldn't that be easy to believe?) were better to hide than without a crowd of cut-throat women? I like that idea of yours. XD
Happy belated birthday! ^__^

evil_little_dog August 6 2011, 00:15:49 UTC

THIS IS HYSTERICAL. I LOVE YOU.

HERE. HAVE AN INTERNETS.

dreamer1789 August 6 2011, 07:12:52 UTC

Glad it could amuse you. Sort of relieved too (for some reason, I can only bring myself to try crack!fic at times I'm sleepy enough that I can barely keep my eyes open, let alone care whether I'm actualy pulling something remotely funny or if it'll never be more than a brave attempt.)

Thanks for the enthousiastic feedback! XD

Because you asked about this icon, yes, you can't see it very well on the black of your page, you need an LJ white or light blue background. It's lion form (TLK) Sora from Kingdom Hearts 2 - I kinda snagged the original piece off DevArt and then resized.

evil_little_dog August 6 2011, 15:06:44 UTC

It's very, very funny. XD

No, I can see the lion-kid; I can't see the thing that looks like a red flamey thing around a stone?

cornerofmadness August 6 2011, 04:15:05 UTC

hahahah this is so much fun

dreamer1789 August 6 2011, 07:19:53 UTC

Thank you very much! I wasn't sure whether it would work for anyone who read, but then again I felt guilty for always shoving ideas inspired by ELD back onto her (mostly because I firmly believe she can do plotbunnies more justice, but also because my muse never provides me with more than a one-liner and then up and leaves and doesn't come back for ages and then not with anything useful), so that's how this happened. ^^;

cornerofmadness August 6 2011, 14:31:00 UTC

hahah yes she had mentioned your plot b unny to me and I said you HAD to run with that one.

muses can be jerks

strandedthought August 6 2011, 05:51:47 UTC

I love this! <3

The writing style is quite fun, as are the little details.

dreamer1789 August 6 2011, 07:22:39 UTC

Thank you!! ^.^ I'm glad you enjoyed it, it was very rushed on my part.