This is my first time playing this girl, but that said, don't go easy. I love crit. Help me improve!

If you're here from adstringendum Rhode's first journal for the game, and all her forgotten CR, can be found here: dreamz_are_mine

Adstringendum CR

Anon On
IP logging Off
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Characters: Rhode Kamelot and OPEN
When: Every night March 6th through 12th
Where: Rhode's dreams
Rating: R+
Summary: Rhode dreams. You dream with her.

( It’s hard to say that I'd rather stay awake when I'm asleep // Cause everything is never as it seems // When I fall asleep )

[The view is the river, and a pair of fancy shoes and ribbons decorating skinny legs.]

...Allen? Where...?[The voice is young, childish and girly, slightly pouty and rather confused. Ribbons block the camera and it goes dark as fingers close over the device. Rhode's face is revealed for a moment, curious and wide-eyed, before the camera is turned ( Read more... )

[The feed turns on to reveal a bedroom lit by a few candles, it looks empty until a pile of blankets in the corner shifts, the faintest high pitched, whimpering sob escaping. Another shift after a moment, a thin, pale arm pulling the blankets tighter and vanishing as the huddle of covers seems to try to fuse itself into the wall and floor, shaking ( Read more... )

[There's a loud crash, something definitely breaking in the background, and a high, worried voice.]

Lero lero! Master Exorcist, lero, R---eeeeek!

[The scream gets dragged from the PCD and Lero's distant protests are barely audible, except for what sounds like pitiful snivelling and whining and a high-pitched, plaintive, Misstresss Rhooode, lero! ( Read more... )

( Chateau Residents--visitors on the night of Tyki's nightmare might be able to hear the shout-y bits. )

( Essays essays essays! Why is Rhode so friendly (relatively) and what's with Lucifer? )

Everyone's awfully quiet about this. Or are you all just tired?

So many~♪ new faces. The Animus must be feeling lonely.

I look forward to getting to know each♪ of you.

You're all so compliant. It's revolting.

Don't you have any pride? You're jerked about like marionettes on a stage♪ and all you can do is mumble things at each other and try to cope with it.

No justice. No retribution. No outrage.

Meek♪ as sheep that fear the shepherd. Is this all you are? Disappointing. I was expecting a few heroes. At least