Comments | dreamsofbluesky: Entry for ten_squared theme of the month: Fooled you

dreamsofbluesky

Entry for ten_squared theme of the month: Fooled you

Apr 14, 2006 10:56

So I sat down planning to write another sappy piece for the theme (come on, 'Fooled you' sounds like its dying for some major fluff), but I was consumed with TEH ANGST! ( <-------- that's the warning, btw. No fluff will be found here.) T____T I keep killing characters off in my stories nowadays. GAH.

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Comments 19

cureless April 25 2006, 13:53:10 UTC

Oh... oh, I'm sorry I didn't see this earlier, but I love it, I really do. I am totally adding your LJ to my writing LJ so that I can keep up with your stuff, okay?

kookie315 May 4 2006, 05:08:16 UTC

Wow, that's beautiful and sad. I love the last line.

kookie315 September 1 2006, 20:49:16 UTC

how the story ended, 'her life exploded into ribbons of....'
nicely done.

crazedgirl622 May 9 2006, 07:01:39 UTC

Wow.. this seriously made me cry. Even though you killed her off, thank you for proving how caring Tenten can be. <3

anonymous July 10 2006, 00:42:52 UTC

ARGH! Way to make me depressed! Through the whole end of the story I was all, "*gasp!* . . . . *gasp!*. . .*gasp!* NOOUUUUUUUUUUUUU!" >tear< Tenten. . . I wanna know what Neji does when he finds her. grr. I feel depressed. Anyway. That was awesome!!!

anonymous September 1 2006, 20:45:21 UTC

lol, yeah, you kill alot of characters in ur stories, but i think that is what makes ur stories really good. the way u make one character protect the other by sacrificing themself and then rite before that, they promise the other person that they will meet them..sigh...this story was so sad.....but i had fun reading it.
u r one of the many few who have a way with words.