Comments | dreamsreflected: LJ idol season 10 episode 5: Fear is the heart of love

dreamsreflected

Jan 15, 2017 16:39

The Ritual of first night ( Read more... )

Comments 10

j0ydivided January 16 2017, 02:20:38 UTC

I love the imagery in this!

favoritebean January 16 2017, 07:31:33 UTC

Reminds me of a time long ago.

penpusher January 16 2017, 21:35:10 UTC

A charming tale of an almost time... but did you intend the "glass" repetition in line 7?

rayaso January 17 2017, 19:08:18 UTC

I loved the imagery, especially in Line 7.

mamas_minion January 18 2017, 00:21:06 UTC

Beautiful poem very evocative imagery