{ chaptered } Tell Me Goodbye ★ 5

[dreamthenextday]

Title: Tell Me Goodbye [5/7]
Fandom: Big Bang
Genre: Angst, smutfic
Pairing: GRi
Rating: PG-13
Warning: This chapter is pretty safe.
Summary: Listening to your elders is useful.
N/A: OH HEY FIFTH CHAPTER.

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[kwonjiyongvips]

OH HEY FIFTH CHAPTER *giggle again*

"Just bring Seungri, Jiyong. I'll walk Gaho for you."
~ Badass TOP being nice :P

Oh! Oh! can I go with you, hyungnim? Is that bag too heavy? Need some help with that?" Seunghyun made his infamous wide-eyed Seungri imitation then raised a thick eyebrow at the other, "You really think your crush on him isn't obvious?
~ HAHAH AWESOME, I LURV TOP IN THIS ONE! XD
Im not used to this btw.. top is always the badass character.. :l

I TOTALLY love Seunghyuns & Seunghyuns little conversation about Ji here, it's ADORABLE D:

"Yeah, that's exactly what you're gonna say. Minus the schoolgirl voice you just made."
~ LOL, I cracked up XD

"And if all fails, I'll take you out for a drink or two... want some kiwi?"
~ HAHAHA how cliche! I can totally picture that XD

[dreamthenextday]

Badass Big Toppa is also a big dork. Let's always remember bingu TOP. I needed to not write badass TOP because he's the one cockblocking one of my other fics. >__>

[peligr0]

OMFG TABI IS SO ADORABLE IN THIS HAHAHA. i was laughing so hard i love him! the way he was eating fruits and aaah hahaha so cute seunghyun. <3

Oh! Oh! can I go with you, hyungnim? Is that bag too heavy? Need some help with that?" Seunghyun made his infamous wide-eyed Seungri imitation then raised a thick eyebrow at the other, "You really think your crush on him isn't obvious?
^and this omg hahaha bingu <3333333

[swrighteous]

I was gonna wait till I finished the whole fic to comment but I just had to say how awesome TOP is in this chapter:
"Ingrate child, nature gives you kiwi because it's great for your body." Seunghyun said, grabbing himself a spoonful of the fruit salad he just made. "Invite me to your wedding. Invite the kiwi too."
I spat my water out on my screen, I was laughing so hard XD

[papersanguine]

Seunghyun looked at the younger one, "Seungri, do you take me for an idiot?"

I love Seunghyun in this chapter!