{ chaptered } Tell Me Goodbye ★ Alternate ending

[dreamthenextday]

Title: Tell Me Goodbye [7/7] (The alternate ending I didn't want to use)
Fandom: Big Bang
Genre: Angst, smutfic
Pairing: GRi
Rating: R
Warning: You're going to hate me.
Summary: Her name was Yoomi.
N/A: OH HEY DIRECTOR'S CUT VERSION.

Comments

[dreamthenextday]

WHY ARE YOU LAUGHING? THE STRONG BABY IS DEAD.

I was aiming for realism. I'm happy I got it. <3

Yeah. .__.

/is raeped omg whut, liking it. D:

[dreamthenextday]

I'm glad you liked it! I wrote it so fast I though it was going to come out completely shitty. D:

[peligr0]

OMFG SEUNGRIIII NOOOOOOOOOO baby... wai... it was just a fling... but now you're gone. TT_TT crying forever.

thanks so much for writing this fic <3.

[parkchoongjae]

I actually thought you'd kill seungri in your original ending. I was kinda expecting it. I would have wanted Jiyong to see Seungri dead and swimming in his blood. A morbid image I know, but I kinda want Jiyong to suffer.

[stupidefleurk]

XD You're so cruel *just like me*keke
When I read the first version I thought he will kill himself too...Jiyong is...dumb.Well we don't know how was their relationship after they made love,so it's kind of disturbing to see him with a girlfriend and doesn't tell seungri about it.

[lustfulsister]

alternative end huh...? awesome writing but don't like it T___T cause I'm crying like a baby, and my eyes are red and puffy and I'm glad that I'm staying home tonight cause I must look therible ;_; XD
but I think you're a genius for making me cry just by the words you've written <3