Heart Challenge: Heart In the Right Place

[awanderingbard]

Title: Heart In the Right Place (TVverse)
Characters: Harry, Kirmani
Rating: PG
Prompt: Heart
Spoilers: None
Word count: 555
Summary: “People lose keys,” I said. “They lose dogs. They lose people. They tend to keep a pretty good hold of their body parts.”
Author's notes: Why is it that I always start one story and end up writing a completely

Comments

[aeron_lanart]

This is just the sort of thing I can see Harry doing! Those last couple of lines made me sniffle quite happily; it's a lovely little piece of fic.

[awanderingbard]

Thank you! Thanks for reading and commenting! (And using one my icons! That always makes me glee)

[joyfulfeather]

Awww! Love the end -- that's so sweet! <3

I love the rest, too -- you have such a knack for making me giggle! Especially these:

“And frog legs are a French delicacy. You eat them with butter and garlic sauce. You don’t put them in potions.”

“No, ‘cause that would be weird,” Kirmani said.

And:

I’d had it up to my pointy hat.

Hee! Great stuff. :D I love Harry and Kirmani being forced to work together, I really do!

[awanderingbard]

Thanks! Kirmani never gets enough love. Thanks for reading and commenting!

[crevanfox]

Good fic, just one thing

It was locked. A did a little magic on it

Should be It was locked. I did a little magic on it

Very cute fic, and he so would return the cheque.

[awanderingbard]

Thanks! I've corrected it, now. Thanks for letting me know and for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)

[gusthemoose]

Ha! Kirmani as Columbo. There's an amusing mental picture. I like the snark. Correction, I love the snark. Great fic.

[awanderingbard]

Thank you kindly!

[rodlox]

"I'd had it up to my pointy hat" ! :D :D

most definately cooler than anything the Potter brat did.

excellent fanfic. bravo.

[awanderingbard]

Thank you very much!