Comments | drippedonpaper: "911, Can You Wait an Hour?"- Prompt: "Run, Don't Walk" LJ Idol

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"911, Can You Wait an Hour?"- Prompt: "Run, Don't Walk" LJ Idol

Jan 19, 2010 01:06

I've often heard an ambulance is the quickest way to the hospital. Unfortunately, now I know that isn't always true ( Read more... )

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myscribbles January 25 2010, 11:15:03 UTC

I enjoyed this. It can be very hard to write an entry with a portion of dailogue, but you did a great job with this.

thndrstd January 25 2010, 19:02:52 UTC

Wow. A great entry, full of emotion. You describe the scene and the terror well. Good job.

drippedonpaper January 25 2010, 20:06:13 UTC

A couple people pointed out I should have shared more about my husband but I didn't find the time to modify it. I am glad you could grasp the memory anyways.

Thanks SO MUCH for your comment!

imafarmgirl January 26 2010, 01:05:37 UTC

Fantastic entry. What a scarey experience!

m_malcontent January 26 2010, 01:34:34 UTC

What a horrible occurrence..glad he is o.k and well done entry