I needed to use Google to get a perspective on this, and I discovered that this is a just a few thousand words shy of the longest Harry Potter book (Order of the Phoenix), which came in at 870 pages (US edition). EIGHT HUNDRED AND SEVENTY. This is such an amazing feat, and I can't begin to fathom the dedication and patience it must have taken to see this all the way through. Bravo!
Now, for the good stuff... ;D
Elliot let the last of his worries go and enjoyed it, loved it, the base pleasure of pushing his cock somewhere tight, the incredible beauty of Toby's hard, sweating body, the lust in his begging and moans, the love in his eyes. Yessss, that was perfection. The entire sex scene in this chapter was insanely hot. (You certainly surpassed my expectations!) It's really difficult, IMO, to write a prolonged sex scene without it becoming repetitive, but that wasn't the case
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Wow. I've been following this story since chapter 31, but I've been scared to comment until now. I can't believe this is over. I used to refresh my computer tab every two nights waiting for my new chapter. Your page was a permanent page on my Chrome. I think I can memorize your entire disclaimer by now, and just...that was such a beautiful note to end on. Ugh that was just...such...amazingness. Seriously, at times you've made me cry through-out the fic, and the progression of this story arc between the two is just brilliant. I can't believe this fic is finished...what am I going to do every night from now on? My god. This is killing me. That was the most crazy, emotional, amazing ride of Fanfiction I've ever been on with someone, and thank you so much for this amazingness.
w00t! That's so awesome! I have loved reading stories that way in the past, hanging on the next chapter, hitting refresh for updates, so if I've done that for you, I shall do a little dance of happy. And I'm even happier that I made you cry, because that's the kind of cruel writer I am.
You?? What am *I* gonna do every night now? (Okay, probably I'm going to start taking care of all the stuff I've been neglecting the last six months...)
Thank you so much, belle! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
Thank you for this amazing, amazing story.. Loved this scene with the two of them being so in love and in synch..iskra and sahem and all of us got what we wanted..and so did Toby. The secret to writing good smut is to remember the emotions of the people involved and you certainly did. This was so beautiful and real. Hell, you even got me to read scenes with rimming and very few people can get me to appreciate those. I love how deeply they are in love, and how close they are. And El has chased Chris' clingy ghost away for good. I can see him hanging with ghost!Gen bitching about Toby. And no doubt ghost!Vern has some thing to say too.. I love this,and am so sad it's over. Now take a long rest, and we'll wait for Barbana's image. Damn her for having a life. Heh.
Yeah, that's definitely what porn is about. One can take or leave plot, but it's got to be about these specific guys, and where they're at right now. And preferably with one of the parties having to work through his inner repression. Rowr.
Oh, for sure, Ghost!Chris has already seduced Ghost!Gen, just to know Toby a little better.
But I wanted to tell you how much I loved your story! I discovered Oz a few month back, went looking for fanfictions, read all I could find and then I got into Oz/Svu. Trying to forget that there aren't many new stories considering the show's kinda 'old' now.
And then I found your story. I waited impatiently each and every new chapter and each one was better than the light. I loved Holly, and Elliot, and Toby; I hated Harry sometimes, hated his grandparents all the time, hated Toby in drag.
I lived with your characters for several month and now that the story is over, I kinda don't know what I'll do each morning instead of checking if there's a new chapter. I'm gonna miss it.
But thank you for writing such a wonderful story.
I absolutely loved it and I hope you'll write more Oz fictions.
Yeah, I only got into Oz about three years ago (where had it been all my life???) and was resigned to the quietness, but thanks to the exchanges and big bang there's still a fair bit bubbling along, and there are so many secret niches and passages to find fic that I keep finding more old (and long!) stories.
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Oh, poor Harry! I feel bad for the kid.
I've got a few more drafts floating around, so more fic is likely. I have no idea what I'll actually manage to finish, but something.
STANDING OVATIONsahem62896April 1 2015, 20:53:33 UTC
Squid, this was a great story... And a very touching ending. And while the sex scene was truly gratifying (toldja he was a bottom!!!), the best parts were the picture at the end of everyone curled up on the couch and the starry sky above afterwards. I have so much more to say, but I'm squeezing this in on my lunch break. More to follow. In the meantime, THANK YOU FOR BRINGING ME AND THE OTHERS ALONG ON THIS AWESOME JOURNEY!!!!
Re: STANDING OVATIONdrsquidloveApril 4 2015, 14:19:01 UTC
Thank you sahem, so much.
You people! I think if Toby learned anything from Chris, it was to be a slut. Bottom, top, sideways, he's for all of it.
I'd originally planned for the TV-after-a-nightmare scene to happen earlier, just the three of them in Toby's apartment. I'm so glad I pushed it back. There's something lovely about the sketchy childhood memories I have of big family things that happened late at night. And especially for Harry, who would probably have nothing like this living alone with his old grandparents.
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I needed to use Google to get a perspective on this, and I discovered that this is a just a few thousand words shy of the longest Harry Potter book (Order of the Phoenix), which came in at 870 pages (US edition). EIGHT HUNDRED AND SEVENTY. This is such an amazing feat, and I can't begin to fathom the dedication and patience it must have taken to see this all the way through. Bravo!
Now, for the good stuff... ;D
Elliot let the last of his worries go and enjoyed it, loved it, the base pleasure of pushing his cock somewhere tight, the incredible beauty of Toby's hard, sweating body, the lust in his begging and moans, the love in his eyes. Yessss, that was perfection. The entire sex scene in this chapter was insanely hot. (You certainly surpassed my expectations!) It's really difficult, IMO, to write a prolonged sex scene without it becoming repetitive, but that wasn't the case ( ... )
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I can't believe this is over. I used to refresh my computer tab every two nights waiting for my new chapter. Your page was a permanent page on my Chrome. I think I can memorize your entire disclaimer by now, and just...that was such a beautiful note to end on.
Ugh that was just...such...amazingness. Seriously, at times you've made me cry through-out the fic, and the progression of this story arc between the two is just brilliant. I can't believe this fic is finished...what am I going to do every night from now on?
My god. This is killing me. That was the most crazy, emotional, amazing ride of Fanfiction I've ever been on with someone, and thank you so much for this amazingness.
Cheers. Kudos to you.
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Scared? Nooooo! I'm not scary!
w00t! That's so awesome! I have loved reading stories that way in the past, hanging on the next chapter, hitting refresh for updates, so if I've done that for you, I shall do a little dance of happy. And I'm even happier that I made you cry, because that's the kind of cruel writer I am.
You?? What am *I* gonna do every night now? (Okay, probably I'm going to start taking care of all the stuff I've been neglecting the last six months...)
Thank you so much, belle! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
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Loved this scene with the two of them being so in love and in synch..iskra and sahem and all of us got what we wanted..and so did Toby. The secret to writing good smut is to remember the emotions of the people involved and you certainly did. This was so beautiful and real. Hell, you even got me to read scenes with rimming and very few people can get me to appreciate those.
I love how deeply they are in love, and how close they are. And El has chased Chris' clingy ghost away for good. I can see him hanging with ghost!Gen bitching about Toby. And no doubt ghost!Vern has some thing to say too..
I love this,and am so sad it's over. Now take a long rest, and we'll wait for Barbana's image. Damn her for having a life. Heh.
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Thank *you* mazephoenix! You've been amazing.
Yeah, that's definitely what porn is about. One can take or leave plot, but it's got to be about these specific guys, and where they're at right now. And preferably with one of the parties having to work through his inner repression. Rowr.
Oh, for sure, Ghost!Chris has already seduced Ghost!Gen, just to know Toby a little better.
S.
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But I wanted to tell you how much I loved your story! I discovered Oz a few month back, went looking for fanfictions, read all I could find and then I got into Oz/Svu. Trying to forget that there aren't many new stories considering the show's kinda 'old' now.
And then I found your story. I waited impatiently each and every new chapter and each one was better than the light. I loved Holly, and Elliot, and Toby; I hated Harry sometimes, hated his grandparents all the time, hated Toby in drag.
I lived with your characters for several month and now that the story is over, I kinda don't know what I'll do each morning instead of checking if there's a new chapter. I'm gonna miss it.
But thank you for writing such a wonderful story.
I absolutely loved it and I hope you'll write more Oz fictions.
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Thank you so much!
Yeah, I only got into Oz about three years ago (where had it been all my life???) and was resigned to the quietness, but thanks to the exchanges and big bang there's still a fair bit bubbling along, and there are so many secret niches and passages to find fic that I keep finding more old (and long!) stories.
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Oh, poor Harry! I feel bad for the kid.
I've got a few more drafts floating around, so more fic is likely. I have no idea what I'll actually manage to finish, but something.
S.
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And while the sex scene was truly gratifying (toldja he was a bottom!!!), the best parts were the picture at the end of everyone curled up on the couch and the starry sky above afterwards. I have so much more to say, but I'm squeezing this in on my lunch break. More to follow.
In the meantime, THANK YOU FOR BRINGING ME AND THE OTHERS ALONG ON THIS AWESOME JOURNEY!!!!
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Thank you sahem, so much.
You people! I think if Toby learned anything from Chris, it was to be a slut. Bottom, top, sideways, he's for all of it.
I'd originally planned for the TV-after-a-nightmare scene to happen earlier, just the three of them in Toby's apartment. I'm so glad I pushed it back. There's something lovely about the sketchy childhood memories I have of big family things that happened late at night. And especially for Harry, who would probably have nothing like this living alone with his old grandparents.
Thank you!
S.
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