I knew this would be amazing, but..edub82April 1 2015, 22:35:10 UTC
You made this even more beautiful than I thought. I'm not the type to get all weepy at sex scenes, but you provoked it, damnit! And they were even "civilized men" about it. Oh how I love a dirty talking, conservative Elliot. This was such an intense, realistic, emotional journey. I feel like I've been through hell and high water with the boys
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Re: I knew this would be amazing, but..drsquidloveApril 4 2015, 14:36:07 UTC
Yeah! Weepy sex scene! That's awesome!
I can only assume that my weakness for the guys talking dirty was utterly transparent in this story.
Y'know, I hadn't really thought about this, but... while I think it will take some time before Elliot can be fucked up the ass (especially since Toby won't do it until he's sure Elliot is genuinely eager), I think it will take even longer before Elliot is willing to fuck Toby up the ass anywhere but in bed, where it feels more like making love and less like fucking. One day Elliot might be relaxed enough to bend Toby over a table and get a little dominating, but that will be a very long time coming. (But it might be the happiest day of Toby's life.)
Hooray! Trying to make this all work within the characters was the goal. I'm totally in favour of taking a little liberty wild plot devices with the boys to get some fun stories, but I really wanted this to feel like them as much as possible. It was way, way harder with Elliot, obviously. :-D And far harder to tackle him on Toby's issues and Chris
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Darling, I realized I didn't comment on your last chapter! Probably slowly weaning myself out of your epic story, letting go of the three weekly romance fix ... ;)
Let's just get the Tourette's out of the way TOBY GOT SOME! (Done :p) That was hot and fantastic, loved the slow progression of Elliot from insecure to really into it Toby I feel more confident in Toby's long term sexual satisfaction now ;) And I loved the realistic touch of Toby taking gloves with Elliot, trying to hide his hint of pain not to spook him.
And no looming ghost Chris in this last chapter. I fucking adored how you made Chris' presence almost palpable in the earlier parts of the story but at that stage, it's right he gives the new lovebirds some space. It's time for Toby to move on, even though he will always remember Chris in his heart. Just not in bed with Elliot.
Hi! Just finished reading the whole story... actually it took me a couple of days to read it all but I enjoyed every single minute of it. I absolutely loved how well you mixed angst and fluff, and how realistic your portrayal of all the characters was. Beautifully written!
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It took a looong time to write, so there was plenty of time for the characters to develop in my head. :-)
(Sorry about the delayed reply; I haven't been around.)
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Yeah! Weepy sex scene! That's awesome!
I can only assume that my weakness for the guys talking dirty was utterly transparent in this story.
Y'know, I hadn't really thought about this, but... while I think it will take some time before Elliot can be fucked up the ass (especially since Toby won't do it until he's sure Elliot is genuinely eager), I think it will take even longer before Elliot is willing to fuck Toby up the ass anywhere but in bed, where it feels more like making love and less like fucking. One day Elliot might be relaxed enough to bend Toby over a table and get a little dominating, but that will be a very long time coming. (But it might be the happiest day of Toby's life.)
Hooray! Trying to make this all work within the characters was the goal. I'm totally in favour of taking a little liberty wild plot devices with the boys to get some fun stories, but I really wanted this to feel like them as much as possible. It was way, way harder with Elliot, obviously. :-D And far harder to tackle him on Toby's issues and Chris ( ... )
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And what a beautiful ending!
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Thank you mulder! For everything along the way.
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Thank you so much for writing the story. I've really enjoyed reading them since you started posting.
I'm happy about the ending but I will miss there is no waiting for the next chapter.
anyway,Thank you for writing this wonderful story!
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I'm glad to hear you say so.:D
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Wheee, haru art! Look at those lovely ripped bodies and how Toby is yanking Elliot close. Mmmm. Thank you *so* much!
I hope it is okay if I slide that up into the body of the story where more people will see it?
And thank you for the kind words!
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Let's just get the Tourette's out of the way TOBY GOT SOME! (Done :p) That was hot and fantastic, loved the slow progression of Elliot from insecure to really into it Toby I feel more confident in Toby's long term sexual satisfaction now ;) And I loved the realistic touch of Toby taking gloves with Elliot, trying to hide his hint of pain not to spook him.
And no looming ghost Chris in this last chapter. I fucking adored how you made Chris' presence almost palpable in the earlier parts of the story but at that stage, it's right he gives the new lovebirds some space. It's time for Toby to move on, even though he will always remember Chris in his heart. Just not in bed with Elliot.
I loved this story to bits THANK YOU <3 <3 <3
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Thank you for sharing this gem :)
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Hey aschicca!
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It took a looong time to write, so there was plenty of time for the characters to develop in my head. :-)
(Sorry about the delayed reply; I haven't been around.)
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