I don't even know where to begin, but I know where to end.
I effing love this piece. From Junsu on the checkout line to Yunho's monologue (which was nothing short of heartstoppingly beautiful) to Jaejoong and Yoochun once again and everything in between.
One of the best i read in a while ----it tugged at my heart at all the right and wrong places and - every word is so pretty, every line so depressing, every paragraph so breathtaking.
This is the sort of fiction that i actually don't want a sequel or prequel or anyone else to remix and mess with it because. It is that well-done and that beautiful and nobody fks with it period.
Hey you. Thanks for breaking my heart again. Jeez. I love you and all but have pity on my heart. This is detrimental for my health. :| I'm starting work, for goodness' sake.
Seriously, though, this was awesome. <3 The Yoosu, I wanted to cry in a wtf wai wai okay imma keep reading jsdksfd gun yoosu with gun junsu junsu kind of way. Wow. I'm incoherent as usual. And Yunho here was just.;; Ack. The entire concept of 'maybe i killed him, maybe i made him up and then killed him' and why this was so made me think of what Yoochun and Jaejoong needed from life. Also, I love how Changmin is someone who's just there and yet part of Jaejoong's life. The robbery with Changmin's 'you called me' line. ;_;
and yes! that's definitely something i wanted to show, the feeling of wanting something so bad that it gets psychosomatic. and a sigh of relief with the jaemin!
erm hello there? i got a question for you.. a really really REALLY personal one that really really REALLY needs to be answered..
Are you against Jaejoong and happiness?? lol please let him end up happy once in a while.. *_* my kidney, heart, stomach, well every other organ in my system are deteriorating because of this..
but i kinda like how you're not like the conventional writers where everything seems fine and perfect and all.. you give the fics that u write a touch of life.. or should i say a slap of reality.. lol.. thanx for writing..
i dunno.. the ending was sorta happy for all of them but i have this feeling that something's seriously wrong.. dun get me wrong.. the jaemin at the end is totally love,, but it's kinda twisted that jaejoong wasn't sure if he made yunho kill himself or made yunho up.. :')
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still is after a couple of re-reads.
but i love it enough to mem'ed it.
:)
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I effing love this piece. From Junsu on the checkout line to Yunho's monologue (which was nothing short of heartstoppingly beautiful) to Jaejoong and Yoochun once again and everything in between.
Brilliant.
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One of the best i read in a while ----it tugged at my heart at all the right and wrong places and -
every word is so pretty, every line so depressing, every paragraph so breathtaking.
This is the sort of fiction that i actually don't want a sequel or prequel or anyone else to remix and mess with it because. It is that well-done and that beautiful and nobody fks with it period.
I'm meming it bb. Thank you for this.
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thank you so much for reading !
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Seriously, though, this was awesome. <3 The Yoosu, I wanted to cry in a wtf wai wai okay imma keep reading jsdksfd gun yoosu with gun junsu junsu kind of way. Wow. I'm incoherent as usual. And Yunho here was just.;; Ack. The entire concept of 'maybe i killed him, maybe i made him up and then killed him' and why this was so made me think of what Yoochun and Jaejoong needed from life. Also, I love how Changmin is someone who's just there and yet part of Jaejoong's life. The robbery with Changmin's 'you called me' line. ;_;
Goodbye now. Until your next piece, bb.
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and yes! that's definitely something i wanted to show, the feeling of wanting something so bad that it gets psychosomatic. and a sigh of relief with the jaemin!
thank you so much for always reading! :)))
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i got a question for you..
a really really REALLY personal one that really really REALLY needs to be answered..
Are you against Jaejoong and happiness?? lol
please let him end up happy once in a while.. *_*
my kidney, heart, stomach, well every other organ in my system are deteriorating because of this..
but i kinda like how you're not like the conventional writers where everything seems fine and perfect and all.. you give the fics that u write a touch of life.. or should i say a slap of reality.. lol.. thanx for writing..
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thank you for reading! :)
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dun get me wrong.. the jaemin at the end is totally love,, but it's kinda twisted that jaejoong wasn't sure if he made yunho kill himself or made yunho up.. :')
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