crying i actually laughed out loud at the beginning of the movie scene, especially with the build to the line what a freaking sicko, yoochun thinks. , just LOL YOOCHUN. and i love your junsu. love love love him. and although it was a small part, i really really liked the jaemin interaction in its bits and pieces. it made me wait/look for more unconsciously and i think that last bit with them definitely came as a pleasant surprise.
this is... i can't really articulate it well, but i really loved it.
i think my favourite thing besides the way we were thrown for so many pretty loops, is the way you wrote these relationships [or not-relationships]. i like the way everything feels kind of desperate and imperfect and unfinished and first-time-but-not-really and quick and in the wrong locations. i liked the way the gun is there and it scares us and it's boneheaded but you didn't do anything cliche with it. i liked the way it all feels so normal but at the end we're forced to re-think everyone's motivations...
and yeah i'm glad i didn't do anything cliche with the gun either, although i won't lie and say i wasn't tempted when it was starting to stagnate a little D:
did you know it took me the entire day to read this
i'm going to show you all my favourite lines because i really liked your word choice in this one ♥♥♥ and the phrasing and the not-as-obvious supernatural~ish elements (:
1) he's back to work by the next day, working the register. he scans bread and soda and deli meats and eggs and wonders if she sells anything for misspent youth.
2) he watches as jaejoong inhales, says
you're magnificent.
jaejoong rolls his eyes, blows the recycled high through the side of his mouth
that's your shitty weed talking.
yoochun leans over and kisses him, his lips sweet and dry
what was that for?
just 'cause.
3) junsu squeezes his wrist and says, you don't have to be so sad all the time, you know.
4) "so dismemberment gets your rocks off wow you're a sick fuck you know that kim junsu who'da ever thunk it mister smiley rainbow pants."
5) and the trip they go on where yoochun gets that splinter in his ringfinger
6) she couldn't keep our baby alive and i didn't want her anymore,
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thank you so much for always reading! :DDD
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i wanna cry and buy lots of watermelon gum.
♥
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i liked the jaechung dynamics in this the most. also, changmin. because he rocks.
jaejoong told him once that misery made for better art.
it's true.
in short: i loved it.
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:DDD thank you so much for reading!
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i think my favourite thing besides the way we were thrown for so many pretty loops, is the way you wrote these relationships [or not-relationships]. i like the way everything feels kind of desperate and imperfect and unfinished and first-time-but-not-really and quick and in the wrong locations. i liked the way the gun is there and it scares us and it's boneheaded but you didn't do anything cliche with it. i liked the way it all feels so normal but at the end we're forced to re-think everyone's motivations...
cheers!
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and yeah i'm glad i didn't do anything cliche with the gun either, although i won't lie and say i wasn't tempted when it was starting to stagnate a little D:
thank you so much for reading!
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did you know it took me the entire day to read this
i'm going to show you all my favourite lines because i really liked your word choice in this one ♥♥♥ and the phrasing and the not-as-obvious supernatural~ish elements (:
1) he's back to work by the next day, working the register. he scans bread and soda and deli meats and eggs and wonders if she sells anything for misspent youth.
2) he watches as jaejoong inhales, says
you're magnificent.
jaejoong rolls his eyes, blows the recycled high through the side of his mouth
that's your shitty weed talking.
yoochun leans over and kisses him, his lips sweet and dry
what was that for?
just 'cause.
3) junsu squeezes his wrist and says, you don't have to be so sad all the time, you know.
4) "so dismemberment gets your rocks off wow you're a sick fuck you know that kim junsu who'da ever thunk it mister smiley rainbow pants."
5) and the trip they go on where yoochun gets that splinter in his ringfinger
6) she couldn't keep our baby alive and i didn't want her anymore, ( ... )
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me tooooo sorry sorry sorry things have been outta control D:
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