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2nd badfic challenge by sprat

Sep 07, 2009 21:33

Title: The Pain Before The Sunrise
Author: MistycalDawnMountainWoman (Aka sprat)
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski/mysterious presence
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: About 1044
Warnings: CONSENT ISSUES. (Seriously -- this is a silly story, but those who can be triggered may want to heed the warning for reals.) Also: use of second-person narration, overuse of adverbs ( Read more... )

badfic challenge 2

Comments 20

mergatrude September 8 2009, 04:32:06 UTC

Then you have sex with him again, because you are both naked and so why not.

GLEEE!!!!!!

And at one point, Diefenbaker comes in and you discover that he's fine, but is hungry, and so you feed him.

SUPER DOOPER DOUBLE DELICIOUS GLEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

I discover I am rendered speechless with hilarity.

sprat September 8 2009, 04:42:18 UTC

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! \o/\o/\o/

norabombay September 8 2009, 06:11:25 UTC

Well this is crack. But no matter the badfic, the wolf must be fed.

sprat September 8 2009, 17:50:45 UTC

This is trufax!

china_shop September 8 2009, 07:10:15 UTC

Oh my god, this is terrifying!

Ray's hand closes around you and begins to squeeze and stroke you, milking you toward completion with a practised ease. It's awful! But also wonderful!

*is speechless, and also dying of giggles*

sprat September 8 2009, 17:51:53 UTC

DUDE. THIS COULD TOTALLY HAPPEN. I HAD TO MAKE IT TERRIFYING FOR ~REALISM. *nodsnods*

luzula September 8 2009, 07:38:12 UTC

Hee, it's so interesting to see the different varieties of badfic. Clearly this is the pretentious and overwrought variety. *g*

It's awful! But also wonderful!

Oh, the angst!

Then you have sex with him again, because you are both naked and so why not.

Ahahaha.

sprat September 8 2009, 17:53:50 UTC

Badfic takes a village, man. :)

Thank you! I'm so glad you appreciate the literary genius I have imbued this with.

j_s_cavalcante September 8 2009, 16:08:18 UTC

Wow, that is quite appallingly bad. In fact, it is SO bad, that only a very good writer could have perpetrated it. (What? It's one of those Gödel's loop things. I think.) The flowing tears were a perfect touch.

MY EYES! *wanders off in search of Brain Bleach (TM)*

sprat September 8 2009, 17:56:03 UTC

Aw, thanks. I basically took this prompt and threw as much appallingness at it as I could muster up. I'm so glad you appreciate that. *g*